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To whom does this come Poetry Contest

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First Place

“I am not the body, which is but dust
I am not fickle and limited mind
To whom then comes the feral thrust of lust
Or for that matter, thoughts loving and kind”—Unseeking Seeker

What’s left behind is the fragrance of the lilac Crushed between forlorn fingers Petals held in contorted hands Once lust rendered dust the terrain shall cover Fierceness is abandoned forgiveness is given To whom does this come, whom shall it deem As father time allots and consumes Pro tem I am, pro tem I am an irrepressibly creative force Manifesting myself by channeling a myriad of diverse and inexplicably bold personas struggling to leave resonance in my wake to whom does this come this legacy that lives on~ is what I shall be

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Speaks Volumes

Date: 11/9/2024 2:51:00 PM

To interpret a mysterious force, takes much thought and perception. Your most eloquent words have embraced the subject and depicted it crushed between forlorn fingers, petals held in contorted hands. I doubt anyone but you could render such clarity to this topic. Congratulations on your well earned win.

I Am Anaya
Date: 11/9/2024 5:53:00 PM

Ty Speaks. It's nice to hear your generous voice and now such lovely comments and compliments. Si, todo mio, Mark Twain said it best in a quote of his I ever so admire. "Forgiveness Is the Fragrance the Violet Sheds on the Heel That Has Crushed It" its no secret. :D

Suzette Richards

Date: 10/29/2024 12:14:00 AM

I am coming late to the table with my congratulations, Anaya. A very powerful write and every line moving one forward, thirsting for the next. FAVing it :)

I Am Anaya
Date: 10/31/2024 5:28:00 PM

Ty, Suzette! ! Quite a surprise getting this honor. A generous comment, ty for the fav !!

Crystol Woods

Date: 10/26/2024 9:57:00 AM

Congratulations Anaya! This is a gorgeous poem,hiabun! Very cool thoughts on the theme USS gave. It's deep and thought provoking poem about what we leave behind for posterity. Xoxo

I Am Anaya
Date: 10/26/2024 10:23:00 AM

Ty, Crystol! Unseeking Seeker's transcendental approach teaches us to take pause settle in and listen to the Divine. The prompt quote his inquiry line, blended with my mind's meditation, onto paper and "voilà," expressing satisfaction! xhugs~Anaya

Duke Beaufort

Date: 10/23/2024 4:43:00 PM

Anaya, congratulations on this write. It's hard to know what we are as essence. As you distill away various portions of our short existence on the planet, what do we leave? I think you capture that we would like something to be there. It's a very difficult question to ponder and you ease me into it. Very cool indeed. Smiles here just thinking about life's meaning!

I Am Anaya
Date: 10/26/2024 10:28:00 AM

Ty, Duke! True that. Let's hope just living from day to day is enough to have meant something. I know your love for poetry and other skills and accomplishments will shine on, dearest Duke! xhugs~Anaya

Panagiota Romios

Date: 10/22/2024 10:10:00 AM

Congratulations on a magnificent wrte, Hugs, Pangie

I Am Anaya
Date: 10/22/2024 10:48:00 AM

Ty Pangie! A pleasure to see you on my page, I'm honored and taken aback by your lovely review!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/21/2024 3:51:00 PM

Wowow. And congrats

I Am Anaya
Date: 10/22/2024 9:43:00 AM

Ty Andrea! To have been awarded with such a high honor is encouraging and quells the trepidation I had. My confidence has been bolstered tremendously!

Jay Narain

Date: 10/21/2024 11:02:00 AM

Excellent composition. you have excelled in this one.

I Am Anaya
Date: 10/21/2024 11:48:00 AM

Ty Jay! I poured heart n soul into the indescribable and unfathomable !!

Karen Croft

Date: 10/21/2024 4:27:00 AM

Congratulations on a well written haibun!

I Am Anaya
Date: 10/21/2024 9:08:00 AM

Ty Karen, I appreciate your congratulations and review!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/21/2024 2:10:00 AM

First placement. Congrats. I read it thoroughly and found it exhilarating.

I Am Anaya
Date: 10/21/2024 9:09:00 AM

Ty Victor glad you enjoyed!

Ink Empress

Date: 10/20/2024 11:25:00 PM

Sweet anaya, i knew this was a winner, so refreshing to see authentic poems win trophy! Congratulations! Well deserved! Keep writing!

I Am Anaya
Date: 10/21/2024 10:30:00 AM

Ty so much for pointing it out, I was a little concerned for you sponsors. Hard work does pay, I think, Ink. It gets confusing the AI business. OKay

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 10/20/2024 11:17:00 PM

great write and congrats on top win! Such creative writing!!! Love it!

I Am Anaya
Date: 10/21/2024 10:36:00 AM

Ty Krish!

David Kavanagh

Date: 10/20/2024 8:26:00 PM

Congratulations Anaya on that great big trophy, winning a Seekers contest is no mean feat, some great lines in here (To whom does this come, whom shall it deem As father time allots and consumes) ain’t that the truth! great poetry, Also I see you you used the lilac quote to great effect, brilliant and deserved win. Cheers David

I Am Anaya
Date: 10/21/2024 10:38:00 AM

Ty David! I am thrilled, a trophy win. I couldn't resist opening with what I thought was a thing of beauty. Cheers!

Valsa George

Date: 10/20/2024 8:04:00 PM

Hearty Congratulations Anaya on your trophy win. A well deserved one. The image too speaks volumes. The contrast between what is ephemeral and fleeting and what that will last, a legacy that lives on.... is so metaphorically and beautifully brought out.

I Am Anaya
Date: 10/21/2024 11:50:00 AM

Ty Valsa! You picked up on what was intended, your words too kind.

Tom Woody

Date: 10/20/2024 4:28:00 PM

Ooh another trophy. Exquisite

I Am Anaya
Date: 10/20/2024 4:41:00 PM

I'll never forget my first. ;)

Karen Jones

Date: 10/20/2024 11:11:00 AM

Congratulations on your top win!!!!

I Am Anaya
Date: 10/20/2024 3:04:00 PM

Ty Karen! What a wonderful surprise!!!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/20/2024 9:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful write from start to end. Great Picture... Have a very blessed day/week writing away.............

I Am Anaya
Date: 10/20/2024 10:23:00 AM

Ty sweet poetess! Paula, isn't that image of a Gothic Father Time perfect for the Halloween-spirited days. Gratitude for your visit and blessings.

Di11y Da11y

Date: 10/20/2024 8:29:00 AM

Congratulations Anaya, well deserved win x

I Am Anaya
Date: 10/20/2024 9:57:00 AM

TY Dilly! I am so excited, overwhelmed, donning the widest grin! by this august honor! Thank you so much for your visit~

Silent One

Date: 10/20/2024 3:59:00 AM

Interesting photo Anaya... Fitting for Halloween... Your poem invites deep reflection on the nature of existence, presenting a delicate balance between acknowledging life's fleeting nature and the hope of creating something meaningful that outlasts it. The language is both lyrical and philosophical, combining introspection with vivid, sensory imagery.

Silent One
Date: 10/20/2024 10:10:00 AM

Awww that's so sweet thank you

I Am Anaya
Date: 10/20/2024 9:54:00 AM

The photo you may recognize mostly during New Years, it's Father Time! I chose this gothic photo because it has a Halloween essence, true that! Time consumes, right? SO, you picked up on what was most important here, one's legacy, I know your legacy will reflect your poetic genius. Ty!

Ink Empress

Date: 10/20/2024 12:00:00 AM

Dear sweet anaya, I absolutely love how youv written this poem and take on the line of enquiry! Especially those opening lines are just so creative! “ What’s left behind is the fragrance of the lilac Crushed between forlorn fingers Petals held in contorted hands “ wow that hits so deep and is so beautiful! Fragrance of lilac and forlorn fingers really left me in awe! “ Manifesting myself by channeling a myriad of diverse and inexplicably bold personas “ love that and i am a strong believer of manifestations. Its so good to see you back to writing again! Best wishes for the contest. Sending you light always .

I Am Anaya
Date: 10/20/2024 9:48:00 AM

Ty Ink yes, the line of inquiry resonates as always Unseeking Seeker makes one think beyond what's readily apparent. It's so good to be back to post my sentiments and share them with you! Ty for the blessings~

Maria Williams

Date: 10/19/2024 11:11:00 PM

Very deep write Anaya and your words 'Pro tem I am, pro tem I am an irrepressibly creative force Manifesting myself ' - for the time being I am - a powerful sentiment - All the best for the contest. Maria

I Am Anaya
Date: 10/20/2024 9:40:00 AM

Ty, Maria! Your review means so much to me. I am honored to know such a talented poetess and lyricist ~Anaya