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The Four Seasons, by Suzette Richards – image generated 20/2/2024

The title of the tanka prose is from the Bible: Ecclesiastes 3

Poetic form: Tanka Prose

See my latest article for details: TANKA PROSE and Popular Poetic Devices

The moonbroch is quite pronounced tonight—rain can’t be far off. It will be good for the vegetable garden and save my back from having to cart water for a few days. Not too much rain, though, as the skins of the tomatoes would split; they are about to be harvested ... in their prime full and promising under limpid sky threadbare jumper gathered close

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/2/2024 10:55:00 PM

So interesting. I never even heard of tanks prose before. It makes such a lovely pattern.

Suzette Richards
Date: 3/3/2024 5:33:00 AM

I'm full of surprises... Watch this space:) Have a nice Sunday, Andrea, and thanks for the kind comment

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/21/2024 11:22:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your creative/great write. Love your pretty picture. Thanks for the notes..... Have a great day writing away......................

Suzette Richards
Date: 2/21/2024 12:41:00 PM

Thank you for the visit, Paula, and your kind comments :)

Tom Woody

Date: 2/20/2024 4:39:00 PM

Great photo, Bible reference and poem Suze

Suzette Richards
Date: 2/20/2024 8:20:00 PM

Thank you, Tom. I do appreciate you reading and your support.