The Four Seasons, by Suzette Richards – image generated 20/2/2024
The title of the tanka prose is from the Bible: Ecclesiastes 3
Poetic form: Tanka Prose
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The moonbroch is quite pronounced tonight—rain can’t be far off. It will be good for the vegetable garden and save my back from having to cart water for a few days. Not too much rain, though, as the skins of the tomatoes would split; they are about to be harvested ... in their prime full and promising under limpid sky threadbare jumper gathered close
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