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‘I was born with the meaning of home running through my veins.’ - Lauren Eden whispers of home rule in the chambers of one’s heart tales of comfort meander through pulsing veins putting roots down in the solid foundations where echoes of love mirror recalled events the path to comfort lit by dawn’s tender light the heartbeat a metronome of anticipation of warm embrace and succour born of stardust and fantastical expectations don’t let reality encroach on the love for home ‘When you are not fed love on a silver spoon, you learn to lick it off knives.’ - Lauren Eden love denied and measured by necessity not forthcoming but fiercely competed for the silver spoon of birthright not evident the shadow of it a taunting reminder of what could have been accomplished, also gained driven by a searing hunger to succeed the knives of experience, the taskmasters love fought for and won over the warrior’s soul to keep an unyielding heart beneath the stormy skies

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Date: 3/20/2025 5:08:00 AM
Creative work, Suzette. Interesting artwork in the portrait of the girl playing the piano. Sara K
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Suzette Richards
Date: 3/20/2025 7:34:00 AM
Thank you, Sara:)
Date: 3/16/2025 10:32:00 AM
Awesome examples. Love the pic of the pretty girl in blue.
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Suzette Richards
Date: 3/16/2025 9:18:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea :)
Date: 3/12/2025 12:42:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start 'til the end. Likewise, an excellent example, too... Moreover, thanks for my placement in your recently judged contest. God bless you.
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Suzette Richards
Date: 3/12/2025 1:34:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comment and ongoing support of my contests/challenges with your top notch poetry, Beata. Regards, Su
Date: 3/10/2025 6:54:00 AM
Great example, Suzette:) so lines can be of any prime number syllables (upto 13). I thought it had to follow the increasing order...
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Suzette Richards
Date: 3/10/2025 7:59:00 AM
'In any sequence...', means 'in any order', :) Thanks for the compliment, Jo

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