Prime Crime - Bt

The rhyme I write 
is of crime that
kills Life in prime,
in a strife his
throat slit by knife
had fear writ large
on him and it 
made me swim in
sweat in dream grim.




9-Dec-2020
Bauk Than - Than Bauk Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: charles messina
In the the format requested in the contest
O. a. O. O 
O. O. a. O
O. b. O. a
O. O. b. O
O. c. O. b
O. O. c. O
O. d. O. c

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Date: 7/30/2021 11:19:00 PM
Hi Sathya, I am not familiar with this poetic form, but you have inspired me to try my hand at it. It looks deceptively easy, but the internal rhyme scheme that cross rhymes with the end word is very effective. FAVing it. Regards, Suzette
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Date: 2/15/2021 9:50:00 PM
Well done, Sathya. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 12/17/2020 9:45:00 AM
You did this well for the Bauk-Than contest. God bless ~ Ani
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