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The Octelle, created by Emily Romano, relies on the repetition of the first two lines as the final two lines of the poem. It consists of eight lines (an octet) that employ personification and symbolism. The syllable count is: 8-8-7-7-7-7-8-8. The rhyme scheme: AA bb cc AA.

The Event Horizon

The event horizon of past
melts with the extant in contrast.
Scenes recalled in vivid hues
meandering in mind’s mews;
significance rearranged
and the sequences now changed.
The event horizon of past
melts with the extant in contrast.

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Mark Toney

November 22, 2024 at 10:46 AM

Thank you for supporting my Flash Poetry Challenge, Suzette. From my perspective, your poem describes the changeable nature of our memories as time passes. Excellent ink.

Suzette Richards

November 22, 2024 at 9:45 PM

Thank you, Mark, for taking the time out of your busy schedule, to read and comment on my poem. It was a pleasure to write for your challenge and I am looking forward to the future challenges. Have a great weekend. Su

Crystol Woods

November 21, 2024 at 11:22 AM

Oh wow very deep thoughts expressed so beautifully, as usual! You never disappoint! Xo

Suzette Richards

November 29, 2024 at 10:45 AM

Thank you for those kind words, Crystol :)

Paula Goldsmith

November 16, 2024 at 7:31 AM

I enjoyed reading your "The event horizon" write. Thanks for adding the notes. What a wonderful picture you have here... Have a blessed day/weekend writing away..................

Suzette Richards

November 29, 2024 at 10:45 AM

Thank you, Paula :)

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