Moonwake

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This poem now serves as the example poem to the Suzette Prime definition found under Types of Poems here at Poetry Soup.

the pulchritudinous moonwake captivates inescapable implicature is inevitable as our psyche thirsts for light so poetry shines into the recesses illuminates umpteen flaws inversely provides balm for forsaken

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/26/2024 10:16:00 AM

Enlightening! Poetry can be a tool for catharsis. Get underneath your skin. Find the form and words that fit the mood. Yes, we need to know the flaws, not to depress ourselves, but to lean into the light. Hugs

Suzette Richards
Date: 10/26/2024 11:59:00 AM

Thank you for this thought provoking feedback, Kim.

Tonye George

Date: 12/4/2023 5:27:00 AM

The first line got me. A short but captivating piece that would leave you finding a needle at the bottom of the sea.

Suzette Richards
Date: 12/4/2023 7:04:00 AM

Thank you for your considerate insight, Tonye.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/30/2023 6:37:00 AM

Creative work for sure. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K

Suzette Richards
Date: 12/1/2023 6:45:00 AM

Thank you, Sara :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/12/2023 10:35:00 AM

Hmmm I think this kind of writing is too far out of my wheelhouse, but it's a cool idea!

Suzette Richards
Date: 11/14/2023 4:33:00 AM

Yes, it is kind of a mindset. Thank you for reading, Anthea.

Ink Empress

Date: 11/4/2023 6:59:00 AM

Suzette prime sounds like an interesting form to try; i love the picture you’ve used here goes with the word weaving so well .I especially love “ balm for the forsaken “ i love both balm and forsaken, two words i love too! Brilliant writ as always . Pleasure reading

Suzette Richards
Date: 11/4/2023 9:12:00 AM

Thank you Ink. I have written a number of Suzette Prime, my favourite being Verismo :) Thanks for reading and your kind comment, as always.