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Headstone in Isolated Cemetery, by Suzette Richards – image generated 15 January 2024


 

The trails of fog like cold entrails that wind and slither through the copse which shiver at the touch and sops. A chance at vision clearly fails. Each jutting rock: a sentinel. A greying headstone stands alone against the tones of verdant cone. My heartbeat sounds like a death knell. A silver coffin bell from ditch. As I am trying t’ place the hums; direction clear from whence it comes in variant beseeching pitch. A hand that reaches up from grave implores me for small change to buy a warming nip of hooch as I surrender will at being brave.

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Date: 10/30/2024 4:34:00 PM
Enjoyed your chilling win, Suzette. Congrats. Terry
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Date: 10/27/2024 8:54:00 PM
hartbeat-deathknell! amazing thought! beautiful write. congratulations on your win dear poet.cheers
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Suzette Richards
Date: 10/27/2024 9:49:00 PM
You had me worried there for a minute, Thriveni, and I checked the spelling against Merriam-Webster. 'death knell' are two words, but the computer game, is spelled as one word. Thank you for visiting and your kind comment. :)
Date: 10/27/2024 8:41:00 AM
Nice work, Suzette. Congratulations. Well done.
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Date: 10/27/2024 9:05:00 AM
Thanks, Jim :)
Date: 10/27/2024 8:06:00 AM
Suzette, I enjoyed your chilling poem, congratulations on your winning placement.
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Date: 10/27/2024 9:04:00 AM
Thanks for the stimulating contest. It was fun writing for it, Tania
Date: 10/19/2024 7:48:00 AM
Chilling and your last verse is funny at the same time - Well written and I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing - Hugs Maria
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Suzette Richards
Date: 10/19/2024 10:52:00 AM
You are welcome:)
Date: 10/15/2024 1:27:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this one. What a great picture to go with it. "Good Luck" if for a contest... Have a wonderful Autumn day...................
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Date: 10/19/2024 10:51:00 AM
:)
Date: 10/15/2024 6:58:00 AM
I am not sure if a haunted cemetery poem can be beautiful but that is the first word that came into my mind after reading this piece! I love it thank you for sharing
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Suzette Richards
Date: 10/15/2024 7:20:00 AM
Thank you, Brian, for your kind comment, I enjoyed writing this poem.

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