Quoth Theraven Poet Rhyme

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The Wait

No end where love's found
no beginning, though there must've been
I can't recall, seems it was always there
going on and on..

No life better known, restless like the forest
hearts awaken at new sight and sound
teasing I see, so pleasing..
two corners lifting at your mouth.

You can go on now, find me..
the place you always knew
waiting, silent as a stone
body and soul lost to you.

A place with no beginning
no tomorrows, nor sorrows
we'll leave them at the gate.
Oh my love, I can't breathe,
can hardly bear the wait.

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Len Gasun February 12, 2022 at 5:46 AM This is romantically beautiful and touching poetry my dear friend Richard. I'm so delighted to read it tonight. Thank you so much for sharing. Blessings to you.

Panagiota Romios January 29, 2022 at 6:41 PM A perfect read for my anniversrsary today.Ah, love! Panagiota. Xoco

Sally Eslinger January 16, 2022 at 5:08 PM At the final syllable, I whispered Wow! to he air here. Thank you for writing and posting this Raven (Richard). P.s. I have been working to draw Ravens and starlings lately. Best wishes

Joseph P. DiMino January 15, 2022 at 9:17 AM One visit was not enough. Very lovely! The heart exposed, is our most beautiful lamp. Great write!

Susan Lawrence January 11, 2022 at 7:55 AM Tears in my eyes listening to the beautiful notes and reading your words of desire and magical love with no beginnings, no tomorrows nor sorrows. A place in between space and time that can last forever . A fav. Thank you for your words and emotions Richard . Happy New Year to you and yours. Blessings, Susan :)

Andrea Dietrich January 7, 2022 at 2:36 PM Just keep coming back to this one. It's really a work of art from you.

Shirley Hawkins January 3, 2022 at 8:01 PM Utterly beautiful. It brought tears to my eyes. I wish I could express my feelings so eloquently. Thank you, Richard.

Darlene De Beaulieu January 1, 2022 at 3:38 PM Hello Richard, this is so romantic. Happy New Year. enjoy your evening my friend.

Andrea Dietrich January 1, 2022 at 12:53 PM Happy New Year, my friend!!

P.S. Awtry December 31, 2021 at 11:01 AM Richard this is poetry. You have expressed something eternal in a voice that is almost a whisper in its softness. Beautiful work :)

Joseph P. DiMino December 30, 2021 at 2:52 PM Well, this perfectly lovely work, must stir every sleeping or resting heart, or those separated from their other romantic halves, to renewed awareness with longing. Excellent write!

Deb M December 30, 2021 at 7:32 AM Oh my what a wonderfully beautiful poem and the music so enhances those beautiful words! Loved it!Debx

Andrea Dietrich December 29, 2021 at 11:59 AM soupmail (as I was rereading this lovely poem) Quoth Theraven December 29, 2021 at 6:04 PM Thanks Andrea, Was waiting for someone to donate an 'e' to me. So glad you had one to spare. "] Hope the holiday season has been filled with hope, love and joy for you and yours my poet friend. -Richard

Paul Callus December 29, 2021 at 11:44 AM Beautiful...romantic and tugs at our heart strings, Richard. The excellent accompanying music matches the mood perfectly. ~ Regards // paul Quoth Theraven December 29, 2021 at 6:11 PM Hi Paul, Thankyou, the music had that effect as I wrote this for a special someone. “And the Grinch, with his Grinch-feet ice cold in the snow, stood puzzling and puzzling, how could it be so? It came without ribbons. It came without tags. It came without packages, boxes or bags. And he puzzled and puzzled 'till his puzzler was sore. Then the Grinch thought of something he hadn't before. What if Christmas, he thought, doesn't come from a store. What if Christmas, perhaps, means a little bit more.” -Dr. Seuss, How the Grinch Stole Christmas!

Mystic Rose Rose December 29, 2021 at 10:57 AM So touching and so filled with love's longing dear Richard, every word softens the heart, and takes it home for me, Have a precious day dear poet. :) Quoth Theraven December 29, 2021 at 6:40 PM Mystic Rose Rose, Thank you for that comment, and for not scolding me for all the missed Wednesday poetry readings. I'll get there one day soon. Best wishes in the new year for a fellow poet who understands what it feels like to be truly vulnerable. -Richard

Lin Lane December 29, 2021 at 3:28 AM I have been too negligent in reading but was fortunate enough to read this one today. I would've missed the smile that curved my lips as I read your line about a heart awakening. I remember... Quoth Theraven December 29, 2021 at 6:45 PM Lin, Thank you. I'm so glad you returned to write here again, more than you know. The Soup wasn't the same without you. The question raised: Can love be found twice in a lifetime? The answer I found: It can if you let it. Best wishes for you in the new year my dear poet friend. -Richard

Malabika Ray Choudhury December 28, 2021 at 3:34 PM romantic and passionate - your poem and the music is a great experience! Enjoyed very much, Richard. BW ~ Mala Quoth Theraven December 29, 2021 at 6:50 PM Malabika, Thank you, I'm glad that there's an acorn of truth in this one. It's hoping to grow into something much more grand in the restless wind. -Richard

Bj Legros Kelley December 28, 2021 at 3:20 PM This is breathlessly beautiful Richard! Quoth Theraven December 29, 2021 at 6:47 PM BJ, Thank you it's a blessing in story-like fable, the one where a frog turns into a prince with just one kiss. -Richard

Beata Agustin December 27, 2021 at 7:38 PM Thanks for sharing this... It's my prayer that God's love will keep on upholding you as you anticipate for the realization/fruition of this: "A place with no beginning no tomorrows, nor sorrows we'll leave them at the gate. Oh my love, I can't breath, can hardly bear the wait." Thanks likewise for constantly cheering me up with your uplifting comments. God bless you. A blessed New Year to you and your loved ones. Quoth Theraven December 29, 2021 at 6:56 PM Beata, Thank you, I found the meaning of strength and devotion in your wonderful prose this year. Keep bringing the light through your faith next year, please. -Richard

Charles Messina December 23, 2021 at 5:09 AM Such a romantic and tender piece, Richard. Many tears on this one. Wishing you and your family Happy & Healthy Holidays! Charlie Quoth Theraven December 29, 2021 at 6:54 PM Hi charles, Thanks. You gotta get through a lotta rain to see the sun shine again. And it really poured a long time. Best wishes for you and yours in the new year friend. -Richard

Connie Marcum Wong December 19, 2021 at 6:32 PM Those who find this kind of love have the greatest karma. You have created a beautiful synergy between the music and your romantic words. I could imagine the passion. Beautiful Richard! I love both your poem and the music you shared. Thank you . Mele Kalikimaka! Blessings xxoo Quoth Theraven December 19, 2021 at 11:16 PM Connie, Thank you for this comment. Perhaps life's greatest pleasure, and also greatest pain.., the wait. Season's best wishes for you and yours. -Richard

Geoffrey Brewer December 19, 2021 at 2:23 AM The lightness of your touch belies the depth of emotion conveyed so well here. A truly moving, memorable and uplifting expression of love! Very well done, Richard. Quoth Theraven December 19, 2021 at 11:10 PM Geoffrey, Thank you for understanding, rules can be bent. Where love exists for two, for one brief moment time sometimes stops. -Richard

Anitha Jayasankar December 18, 2021 at 10:26 AM So beautiful a romantic write Richard... God bless... ~ Ani Quoth Theraven December 19, 2021 at 11:05 PM Anitha, Thank you for that comment. There's joy in this season. -Richard

Janice Canerdy December 18, 2021 at 7:16 AM SO expressive, romantic, and moving, Richard. Janice

Janice Canerdy December 18, 2021 at 7:15 AM SO expressive, romantic, and moving, Richard. Janice Quoth Theraven December 19, 2021 at 11:03 PM Janice, Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. It's as timely, and true as any I've ever wished. -Richard

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