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Originally published: 26th February 2023

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This Poem was placed 1st in the "Bitesize No. 64" Contest sponsored by Line Gauthier (Judged 14th June 2023)

As featured in the Poetry Soup Anthology: "Radiant Verses"


Coping with loss


Lit By Love

there’s a silence somewhere that listens and hears

that feels all our pain through the gift of our tears

that helps us to see in that dark which we hide

by shining a light - lit by love - deep inside.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 10/15/2024 7:30:00 AM
Beautiful hymn to the hidden God Who is light and love and heals the unseen.
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Gary Radice
Date: 10/15/2024 8:49:00 AM
Thank you Frances. Cheers - Gary
Date: 8/2/2024 8:35:00 AM
Very inspiring- a kind word can go a long way
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Gary Radice
Date: 8/2/2024 3:04:00 PM
I appreciate your comments Paige, thank you. Cheers - Gary
Date: 7/4/2023 10:58:00 AM
Although this poem speaks of pain and sadness, yet it ends with words of hope for the future. My attention is also drawn to the perfect rhymes and smooth flowing delivery. ~ Regards // paul
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Gary Radice
Date: 7/4/2023 11:24:00 AM
Thank you Paul. I originally planned a poem based on The Lady Chapel at Liverpool Anglican Cathedral Ann and I were visiting last year. The idea though felt a little flat; it was to be a straightforward description of that small but beautiful chapel in the cathedral's basement. Rather than stick with that, I started thinking about the atmosphere of the place and how I could put that into words instead - hence this poem. :) Cheers - Gary
Date: 5/31/2023 8:41:00 AM
True verses that express both darkness and hoe for we mortals. A fav, a gem my friend. God bless.
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Gary Radice
Date: 5/31/2023 11:49:00 AM
Hi Robert. Thank you! Yes..hope..there always has to be hope in the darkness. Cheers - Gary
Date: 5/31/2023 8:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your Win! This was a powerful poem, Gary. A unique way of conveying the Love that lights the way through our darknesses, my friend. Thanks for sharing your insights with us through your poetry. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Gary Radice
Date: 5/31/2023 11:48:00 AM
Thank you Bill. I appreciate your visit, read and comments. Cheers - Gary
Date: 5/30/2023 1:21:00 PM
Gary, a beautiful poem and congratulations on your win, well done !
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Gary Radice
Date: 5/30/2023 2:21:00 PM
Hi Constance. Thank you. A poem about loss but one that hopefully offers up hope too. Cheers - Gary
Date: 5/30/2023 7:14:00 AM
- Beautifully penned, Gary - Congratulations on your top win :) - hugs
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Gary Radice
Date: 5/30/2023 11:03:00 AM
Thanks so much Anne-Lise. Cheers - Gary
Date: 5/29/2023 11:45:00 AM
What wonderful thoughts to hold onto when such a situation next presents itself. Congratulations on having written this winning verse, Gary.
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Gary Radice
Date: 5/30/2023 6:09:00 AM
Hi Lin. Thank you and belated congratulations on your Poem Of The Day. :) Cheers - Gary
Date: 5/29/2023 2:18:00 AM
Simply and beautifully said Gary! Debx
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Gary Radice
Date: 5/30/2023 6:06:00 AM
Thanks Deb. The same applies to your lovely comment :) Cheers - Gary
Date: 5/10/2023 1:05:00 PM
Another win I see Sir Congratulations I have always loved your work since I first read one of your pieces. 2 in a row I hope you get a Trii-factor like the American Gothic Trident Subject flow choice and no overuse of insignificant words and always has relevance and meaning. Congrats again Gary well done
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 5/11/2023 2:29:00 PM
Best reply or comment ever Totally agree Comments and replies are the actual tea true with Here here well said
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Gary Radice
Date: 5/11/2023 2:07:00 AM
Hi Christopher. The real wins come not from contests (nice as they are) but from comments such as yours. Much appreciated. Cheers - Gary
Date: 4/23/2023 3:58:00 AM
Back with congratulations. Way to go. I enjoyed reading it the second time. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara
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Gary Radice
Date: 4/26/2023 5:30:00 AM
Thank you Sara. Much appreciated. Cheers - Gary
Date: 4/22/2023 5:31:00 PM
Dear Gary, whenever we love there is the danger of inevitable loss. When we experience it, a light - lit by love - soothes the darkness within. A potent and poignant piece, my friend. Congratulations for your win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Gary Radice
Date: 4/23/2023 2:22:00 AM
Indeed Susan. Thank you. You've described exactly as intended the message I wished to convey. Cheers - Gary
Date: 4/22/2023 1:34:00 PM
Deep and to the point...
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Gary Radice
Date: 4/23/2023 2:16:00 AM
Thank you Lois. Cheers - Gary
Date: 4/21/2023 7:10:00 AM
Sweet comfort Gary! :)
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Gary Radice
Date: 4/21/2023 8:31:00 AM
Thank you Linda! :) Cheers - Gary
Date: 4/15/2023 2:07:00 AM
Comforting words for troubled times, Gary. Speaks volumes !
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Gary Radice
Date: 4/15/2023 2:16:00 AM
Thanks Peter. Hope you're keeping well. Cheers - Gary
Date: 4/13/2023 11:02:00 AM
This poem has endless depth. It resonates with me. Regards, Suzette
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Gary Radice
Date: 4/13/2023 12:25:00 PM
Hi Suzette. I'm so glad it resonates with you. Thank you for your visit. Cheers - Gary
Date: 4/13/2023 9:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Gary. Whenever I see one of your poems listed I know I am in for a poetic feast! I love the first line. There is so much said in your simple lines - like Sandburg's fog on little cat feet - such a feeling of compassion and comfort. Sending you blessings of the Easter season. Hope you are well and staying inspired.
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Gary Radice
Date: 4/13/2023 10:10:00 AM
Thanks Sam for your lovely words. I always try and keep the poems as simple as I can but the simpler and shorter they are, the harder I find they are to write. Go figure! :) I've actually just posted a blog about having difficulty finding my muse at the moment so am taking a time-out from writing at PS. Hopefully it wont be for long. I've much catching up to do with the reading of others' poems - yours included of course. Cheers - Gary
Date: 4/9/2023 9:35:00 AM
A Deep message in simple words!! Absolutely loved it Gary!!
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Gary Radice
Date: 4/9/2023 12:26:00 PM
Smita, thank you for your lovely comments. Cheers - Gary
Date: 4/8/2023 10:31:00 AM
WOW!!! What a powerful write in a few words. Love it. Blessings as you write away...................
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Gary Radice
Date: 4/9/2023 12:25:00 PM
I love the idea that you thought my simple poem to be powerful Paula. I take a lot from that. Cheers - Gary
Date: 4/1/2023 7:04:00 PM
and i concur with the wisdom and brevity...excellent execution....loved it...
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Gary Radice
Date: 4/2/2023 2:15:00 AM
Thanks Timothy. Much appreciated. Cheers - Gary
Date: 3/28/2023 6:50:00 AM
Deeply expressive write Gary. Nice! :)
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Gary Radice
Date: 3/28/2023 1:48:00 PM
Thanks again Linda for your support. Much appreciated. Cheers - Gary
Date: 3/23/2023 4:50:00 AM
Your words beautifully express the comforting and transformative power of a divine presence that is attuned to our struggles and guides us towards inner light and healing. Well done!
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Gary Radice
Date: 3/23/2023 7:01:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments Kabutha. Cheers - Gary
Date: 3/22/2023 8:18:00 PM
A very convince-filled poem. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Gary Radice
Date: 3/23/2023 12:49:00 AM
Thank you Christuraj. :) Cheers - Gary
Date: 3/5/2023 11:12:00 AM
Greetings Gary. Another movingly fine write that celebrates love's glow, a sustaining force in a troubled world. I hope that your lung problems have long left you. Sincerest regards, Brian
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Gary Radice
Date: 3/5/2023 12:45:00 PM
Thanks Brian. It's only been the last two weeks really that I've improved to the point I'm no longer coughing and got my energy back. Poetry pulled me through. :) Cheers - Gary
Date: 3/5/2023 5:08:00 AM
Simply beautiful Gary! Debx
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Gary Radice
Date: 3/20/2023 1:40:00 PM
Deb - Thanks so much. I'll take a look at your latest poems in the next couple of days. Cheers - Gary
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