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Stolen Nights

Dawn crosses itself through my latenight dreams The bruised fingers of the skies, me awakening. Where light was spotted before the start This gray uncoils from my fist, squeezed with my heart. Now the breakdown of once shut eyes strain Dawn is called true daybreak — With another outward far off shine She's only ghost according to clockwork time Morning on glass through ever bonding cobwebs The dark in its light, still descends.

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Date: 5/18/2025 11:13:00 PM
This is very enchanting. One of your best, Paige
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Date: 5/18/2025 5:51:00 PM
how mysteriously engaging can this be...i get this eerie yet delicious stab in the gut...wow, paige!
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Date: 5/18/2025 12:56:00 PM
Paige, this is hauntingly beautiful. I felt every line like the echo of a dream just slipping away. “The bruised fingers of the skies” and “gray uncoils from my fist” especially struck me--what stunning, tactile metaphors. You’ve captured that liminal space between night and morning, memory and meaning, in such an achingly poetic way.
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Date: 5/18/2025 1:31:00 AM
Hi Paige, This is superb! I did one in a similar vein some time ago: 'I Dance with Shadows'. I'm FAVing yours :)
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Date: 5/18/2025 12:02:00 AM
Dear paige, how you paint imagery is so vivid, and the metaphorical nature of your word weaving is truly impressive! This is such a deeply moving poem, so powerful, and soul hitting! Pleasure reading you always! Sending you light
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Date: 5/17/2025 8:47:00 PM
Dear Paige your poem is fantastic, haunting, surreal, and rich with metaphysical and emotional imagery. It's fragile transition from night to dawn, not just as a time of day, but as a state of consciousness and emotional reckoning is wonderful, this is a fave for me.
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