Daniel Turner Poet Rhyme

Poet's Honeymoon Collaboration With Joanna Daniels

POET'S HONEYMOON
Pretend we're on a poet's honeymoon
Let's dance atop the Massifs on the moon
We'll get our fill of Milky Way's champagne
Behind a chariot of stars, the twain

Each star a stepping stone of Heaven's rune
That leads down to a luminous lagoon
And when Andromeda begins to wane
We'll take our muses to another plane

Riding on the shooting star, we will croon
Rhapsodying together, hearts in tune
Lost in love, our muses will not complain
As we set foot in Sombrero's domain

Each planet, we'll decorate with festoon
And get drenched in Saturn's diamond monsoon
Once heights of passion with words, we attain
Back to earth, where we can pretend again.

Form: Rhyme (10 syllables)
26.03.2023



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           3/24/23
Daniel Turner   Joanna  Daniels

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Eve Roper April 7, 2023 at 9:57 AM Great write , Daniel, congratulations on your win. Blessings friend Daniel Turner April 11, 2023 at 4:35 AM Thank you, Eve.

Ann Peck April 4, 2023 at 2:27 PM Wow, this is so magical! Congratulations on your win, Daniel! Daniel Turner April 4, 2023 at 3:38 PM Thank you, Ann. Isn't imagination a wonderful thing?. How have you been? Everything going your way? Great to see you, Ann. Take care:)

Beryl Edmonds April 2, 2023 at 11:38 AM Back with congratulations on your win in the contest and to say what a wonderful collaboration it is between you and Jo… Belle Daniel Turner April 2, 2023 at 4:10 PM Thank you, Belle. It was fun to write. Be well.

Panagiota Romios March 31, 2023 at 2:59 AM What a terrificlly penned masterpiece.Daniel and Joanna. Back..well, done. Panagiota.xo. My brief cold went away, thanks, Posting new poems everyday, is not my thing anymore, fouur years of that, burnt me out. Daniel Turner March 31, 2023 at 3:42 PM thank you, Pangie. It was fun! We write, when we write , you know how it works. Take care . Always great to see you.

Frederic Parker March 30, 2023 at 1:54 PM congratulations Daniel, well done! Daniel Turner March 30, 2023 at 2:13 PM Thank you, Frederic. Good to see you again, sir:)

Alexis Y. March 30, 2023 at 7:49 AM Hi Daniel, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your win. Jo's addition worked well with your verses. Have a nice day:-) Alexis Daniel Turner March 30, 2023 at 8:32 AM Thank you, Alexis. I appreciate your kindness and support.

Linda Alice Fowler March 30, 2023 at 7:35 AM Back with huge congratulations on your win and with the lovely addition of Jo's stanzas! :) Alice Daniel Turner March 30, 2023 at 8:32 AM Thank you, Alice. I appreciate your kindness and support.

Valsa George March 30, 2023 at 6:42 AM Simply Beautiful, dear Daniel. Congratulations on your top win ! Daniel Turner March 30, 2023 at 6:56 AM Thank you, Valsa I reall apprecaiate your kindness and support.

Joanna Daniel March 30, 2023 at 6:20 AM I loved this one, DT, congratulations on your win and it was fun collaborating with you:) Daniel Turner March 30, 2023 at 6:55 AM Thank you, Joanna. Indeed it was fun. Thank you for the inspiration:) I really love how you finished it:)

Heidi Sands March 26, 2023 at 5:22 PM This is lovely and fun ! :) Daniel Turner March 26, 2023 at 5:27 PM Thanks Heidi. It's still fun to pretend:) Have a super evening.

Anne-Lise Andresen March 26, 2023 at 12:27 PM - Sounds heavenly, Daniel ... mine was a completely different flight :))) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs Daniel Turner March 26, 2023 at 5:25 PM Thank you, Anne. Probably the airline's fault:) Always good to see you. Be well!

Panagiota Romios March 26, 2023 at 9:58 AM Awesome,. Pangie xo Daniel Turner March 26, 2023 at 10:06 AM Thank you, Pangie. Always a pleasure:) Hoping you are well.

Paul Callus March 26, 2023 at 9:22 AM Honeymoon or not, whichever plane you are on, Danny, your muse is bound to deliver! Looking forward to see Joanna's addition to these stanzas. ~ Regards // paul Daniel Turner March 26, 2023 at 10:06 AM Thank you Paul Your kind comments are much appreciated. Have a super evening my friend. (7 hours difference. It is noon here)

Susan Ashley March 26, 2023 at 8:46 AM Dear Daniel, dreamy imagery spills with romantic beauty from your golden pen. My heart's imagination is intoxicated on this potent poetic enchantment. Love it! Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan Daniel Turner March 26, 2023 at 10:01 AM Hello Susan. Great to see you again. I appreciate your kind support. Have a super Sunday.

Gershon Wolf March 25, 2023 at 9:20 PM This is great. I feel as if you summoned your inner Ray Bradbury or Isaac Asimov for this one, Daniel. Simply stellar! :) gw Daniel Turner March 26, 2023 at 10:00 AM Thank you, GW. Always happy to see you. Have a super Sunday my friend.

Demetrios Trifiatis March 25, 2023 at 1:07 PM An uplifting and inspiring poem, dearest friend, Daniel. Your Muse, certainly, is in a great mood. Good luck. Blessings! Daniel Turner March 25, 2023 at 1:18 PM Thank you, Demetrios. I'm rarely in a bad mood, just happy to be alive:) Great to see you my friend. Let's do it again, soon:) Be well my friend.

Alexis Y. March 25, 2023 at 8:53 AM Wow! Daniel, This is a good entry for the contest theme. I found it to be dreamy, magical, and poetic. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis Daniel Turner March 25, 2023 at 9:23 AM Well hello Alexis. Long time no see. Thank you so much. I hope life has been treating you well. Have a great weekend yourself:)

Linda Alice Fowler March 25, 2023 at 8:44 AM Beautiful beginnings, romantically linked to the skies. I love! Alice :) Daniel Turner March 25, 2023 at 9:21 AM Thank you, Alice. I hope you are having a big Texas kinda weekend. Are you bar b quing brisket? It's gorgeous here today. talk at you later:)

Suzette Richards March 25, 2023 at 8:15 AM An engaging poem. I love the surreal imagery. FAV Daniel Turner March 25, 2023 at 9:18 AM Thank you, Suzette. I really appreciate your time and support. Have a wonderful weekend.

Deb M March 25, 2023 at 7:18 AM Really lovely Daniel….l especially like the first two lines of the second paragraph! Debx Daniel Turner March 25, 2023 at 7:36 AM Thank you, Deb. I appreciate your time and your support. Always great to see you. I hope your weekend is a good one:)

Vijay Pandit March 25, 2023 at 6:01 AM Your poetic prowess shines in this write, Daniel. Splendid imagination--so well done! Daniel Turner March 25, 2023 at 6:17 AM Thank you, Vijay. I appreciate your kind comments and your support. Have a wonderful weekend.

Sara Kendrick March 25, 2023 at 5:57 AM I like the way you used the descriptive lines comparing being out in space to the out in space feelings(LOL) of being newlywed on a honeymoon. My honeymoon wasn't like what people do today on very expensive honeymoons, but it was not like some who get married and get up and go back to work the next day either. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara Daniel Turner March 25, 2023 at 6:16 AM Thank you, Mrs Sara. Nor was mine. I appreciate you stopping to read and comment. Be well and have a nice relaxing weekend. Should be beautiful weather:)

Mystic Rose Rose March 25, 2023 at 3:34 AM I love honeymoons especially when it involves poets and poetry, it can't be none else but beauty, :) Daniel Turner March 25, 2023 at 6:14 AM Thank you, Rose. I appreciate your support. Hope you are doing well and having a super weekend:)

Arlo Parker March 24, 2023 at 9:27 PM Baffo, DT!! ~;o) Daniel Turner March 27, 2023 at 3:23 PM LOL I knew what you meant. I think I know you. Arlo Parker March 26, 2023 at 5:24 PM How about: great write!... Daniel Turner March 25, 2023 at 6:13 AM Thank you, Arlo. I guess baffo is a good thing:) I appreciate you dropping by to read and comment. Have a great weekend.

Fin Chuuk March 24, 2023 at 8:03 PM We can all pretend all we like. Who is going to stop us. Everyday I pretend I’m the happiest person on earth. Just so people around me can be happy too. Fantastic poem, Danny. :) Daniel Turner March 24, 2023 at 8:06 PM Good on you, Fin. My kind of guy:) I appreciate your kindness and your admirable attitude. Have a top shelf weekend my friend.

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