Floating Shards of Dream

"a dagger of pain, a tear of grief" - Quote by - Constance La France With the melodic cadence of my fervent heart, pulsated the charming tinsels of the mesmeric night, gleamed my love for you with the enticing tinge, suffused with the sequins of the silver moon. I felt in a trance the sweet touch so tempting of your captivating charisma intangible, but you drifted away from my engrossed perception like the autumn cloud wafting in the twilight sky. In the barren valley of flowers my cataract heart, cascaded as the stream of melted glacial mind beyond the turquoise course of lingering longing, on the desolate plateau I wandered going nowhere. From the ebony edge of the gloomy night storm clouds surged with blades of shearing pain, lacerated the lilting facade of the sky I call my heart, where the shards of dream floated in tears of grief. ______________ May 16, 2023 Contest : Writing Challenge A Quotes Sponsored by : Constance La France

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Date: 5/21/2023 12:15:00 AM
Subimal, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/21/2023 10:58:00 PM
Thank you for the placement, Constance.
Date: 5/20/2023 11:27:00 AM
- A beautiful poem, Subimal :) - Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 5/21/2023 10:57:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise
Date: 5/16/2023 3:17:00 AM
WoW! FAVing it. It is so rich in imagery that it deserves multiple readings. Beautifully penned, Subimal. Regards, Suzette
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Date: 5/16/2023 11:22:00 PM
Thank you, Suzette for your kind visit and for the wonderful comments. Thanks also for faving it.
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