A Vine in Winter

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denuded of foliage left with the bare essence of my existence a gnarled unassuming frame from which new life will burst forth in spring firmly anchored in fertile soil the terroir for the vineyard selected with care basking in the watery winter sun incapable of turning my head for the best aspect consoling myself with the fact that my tender tri-lobed leaves will harvest the energy from the sun but for now, I content myself to relish the well-deserved rest

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thriveni c mysore

Date: 3/4/2025 3:03:00 AM

You breathe life into the vine, stripped of foliage, unassuming, anchored, in natural environment, tri-lobed leaves harvesting the energy of the sun, each word and line is weighed here dear poet. amazing write. beautiful image too. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!

Suzette Richards
Date: 3/4/2025 7:37:00 AM

Thanks :)

Margaret Foster

Date: 3/3/2025 6:28:00 PM

I enjoyed reading this poem. The peaceful imagery compliments the words. A pleasure to read cheers.

Suzette Richards
Date: 3/4/2025 7:37:00 AM

Thanks :)