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Misty Blues

Oh, trees of once so forest green now shrouded to me in pale hues as my hearts reflection of blues mirrors a lifeless figurine Pray hide from me sunbursts of glow for the sky is of mist alone and where I roam as cold as stone all thoughts run deep and overflow Shadowy shaped vapours haunt me with your gaze of cerulean blue and if to feel your touch I drew my hand that longed the touch of thee All worn paths I fear now to tread for there are haunting scents of you that so relentlessly pursue a heart that’s already long dead All alone as teardrops of blue and misty, hazy dreams of you float away once more out of view forsaking what my heart once knew

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Date: 2/20/2025 7:19:00 AM
Revisiting this fave today. You're so good Christine. Hope you start writing again
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Date: 7/10/2024 12:36:00 PM
How beautifully written your poem is..Sad ,melancholic,nostalgic and beautiful.
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Christina Bowring
Date: 7/10/2024 1:22:00 PM
Dear Charmaine, thank you so much for reading the poem and for your lovely comments of which is appreciated. Truly grateful. Blessings to you :)
Date: 7/8/2024 1:42:00 PM
This poem is a deeply emotional exploration of loss and longing. Through its use of vivid imagery, evocative language, and the symbolism of nature and colour, it creates a poignant narrative of a heart overwhelmed by sorrow. The themes of haunting memories and isolation are skillfully conveyed, leaving a lasting impression of melancholy and introspection.
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Christina Bowring
Date: 7/10/2024 1:16:00 PM
Dear SO, it’s great to have you visit again. Thank you so much as always for your in-depth perceptive response to the poem. Loved reading your accurate analysis. Many thanks for your encouragement. Blessings to you.
Date: 7/1/2024 2:47:00 PM
You are such an amazing poet, glad I didn't miss this one, have a precious day , :)
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Christina Bowring
Date: 7/2/2024 2:34:00 PM
Dear sweet Rose, how your so generous comments have so warmed me tonight reading this. It means so much to me especially as my muse has taking leave and this will inspire me to light a poetic glowing fire again. You too, are an amazing poet with an amazing heart. Big hugs of gratitude to you and thank you for making my day. Hugs of gratitude xx
Date: 6/27/2024 3:34:00 AM
beautiful poem, has such a haunting musical quality, thanks for such a wonderful write!
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Christina Bowring
Date: 6/27/2024 12:48:00 PM
Dear Kate, thank you so much for such positive, encouraging comments of which are gratefully received. Thrilled to read,’ haunting musical quality’ - essence of the poem. Thank you! :):)
Date: 6/26/2024 10:50:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your lovely "Misty Blues" write with a wonderful ending. This came from your soul/powerful. I wish you would write more... Have a great day writing away...............
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Christina Bowring
Date: 6/26/2024 11:44:00 PM
Dear sweet Paula, thank you so much for your lovely visit and such kind, generous comments. Always so nice when you visit and you put smiles on so many faces. Thank you. Gratitude and smiles to you xx
Date: 6/15/2024 6:13:00 PM
I'm drawn in to your 'shadowy shaped vapors' Christina, and your 'haunting scents'. A visual and olfactory journey nicely penned. hugs :)
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Christina Bowring
Date: 6/16/2024 7:21:00 AM
Hello dear Linda. Lovely to have you visit and many thanks for your inspiring comments. I’m so glad that the poem drew you in. Thank you. Hugs and smiles xx :):)
Date: 6/15/2024 4:28:00 PM
Just beautiful Christina…..you are one incredibly talented lady! A sorrowful, touching write….poetic perfection! I’m surprised l missed it! Debx
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Christina Bowring
Date: 6/16/2024 7:08:00 AM
Dear Deb, my heartfelt thanks to you for your visit :) Thank you so much for your generous and such uplifting words. I so appreciate it and reading your comments put a big glow on my face. Thank you so much. Hugs of gratitude to you lovely friend xx
Date: 6/13/2024 12:44:00 PM
Your world has been changed by grief, Christina. This is a deeply moving poem that reaches out for comfort and resolution. Your expressed depth of emotion and use of strong images, give words to other grieving hearts and permission to feel - to heal. I know this poem comes from a place deep in you. Thank you for expression of these feelings. Blessings of comfort to you.
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Christina Bowring
Date: 6/15/2024 8:43:00 AM
Dear Sam, your thoughtful and so considerate response truly warmed my heart. What a lovely, caring soul you are. Thank you so, so much. I really did put my heart and soul into this piece. Many blessings and hugs of gratitude to you xx
Date: 6/8/2024 5:14:00 AM
Beautifully mournful poem, Christina. I'm very moved by it. Enjoy your June weekend. All the best to you. :)
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Christina Bowring
Date: 6/8/2024 1:23:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Regina for reading the poem and leaving such uplifting comments which are received most gratefully. I’m so glad that you found it moving. Many blessings to you for a great summer :)
Date: 6/6/2024 10:22:00 AM
Christina, you captured the essence of grief that could apply to a loss of a loved one. This is so intense that it invokes a sense of deep sadness in my mind and opens up thoughts of all kinds of losses that we must face in life. We only hope that there is some joy left to offset the downsides of life.
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Christina Bowring
Date: 6/8/2024 12:59:00 PM
Dear Duke, great to have you visit as always. Thank you for sharing your valued thoughts and for the encouraging support. So appreciated my friend. I hope there is always much joy in your life. Blessings to you :)
Date: 6/3/2024 6:25:00 PM
I rarely view replies to my comments but I happened to see that you asked me what "only A forms" means. It means forms that begin with A. For example: acrostic or abc form, etc. I used acrostic if you are referring to a contest by Constance. Her latest contest features B forms and there are hardly any. Blitz and blank verse. That's about it. You can find types of forms at the top of poetrysoup home page
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Christina Bowring
Date: 6/4/2024 12:29:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Andrea. Crystal clear now :) xx
Date: 5/31/2024 5:33:00 PM
Another masterpiece lovely lady.
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Christina Bowring
Date: 6/1/2024 6:14:00 AM
Dearest Wen, treasured beautiful comments from a treasured friend. Thank you so, so much for your illuminated presence here which always brings such joy. Also, for your continued valuable support. I managed to work out how to put a music vid on and was thinking of you when doing so :) I’m learning slowly! I hope you are all having a good weekend. Luv and blessings to you always. Big hugs xx
Date: 5/31/2024 1:57:00 PM
Dear Christina, I apologize for not previously acknowledging your beautifully crafted poem that delves into themes of loss, longing, and sadness. Your poignant exploration of heartbreak and solitude, as well as the lingering memories of a past relationship, is both moving and captivating. The emotive language you employ effectively conveys a sense of melancholy and yearning. The imagery you use, including words like "shrouded," "reflection of blues," "shadowy shaped vapors," and "teardrops of blue," evokes feelings of sorrow and longing. Your incorporation of color imagery, such as "pale hues" and "cerulean blue," enhances the emotional depth of the poem.
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Christina Bowring
Date: 6/1/2024 5:59:00 AM
Dear Sotto, always such a pleasure when you visit. Thank you so much for your in-depth and insightful response to the poem. Always so appreciated and a delight to read. Your encouraging and supportive visits are always so uplifting and inspiring to us all. Thank you so much for your careful and thoughtful analysis here once again. Heartfelt thanks and blessings to you.
Date: 5/31/2024 7:49:00 AM
Lost love is not easy, and healing takes time so well expressed in this work. Keep on writing. Sara K
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Christina Bowring
Date: 5/31/2024 12:04:00 PM
Dear Sara, many grateful thanks to you for your thoughtful comments and encouragement. Very much appreciated. Thank you. Blessings to you :):)
Date: 5/30/2024 2:00:00 PM
What to say? Misty Blues, another masterpiece of my beloved Christina. Such a deligh to read!. Nature pain touched with your most profound feelings. I am not giving you my favourite line, because all the lines penned are genuine evoking the poor reality we have about our nature, which is the most important thing we will always have. BRAVO for this piece of art. My love Christinaxxx
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Christina Bowring
Date: 5/31/2024 12:21:00 PM
My dearest, sweetest Maria, your presence here has lit the page and so brightened the day. Your generous heart never fails to lift the spirits just as your own so inspiring, uplifting poems do. Thank you so, so much my endearing friend for your continued, so valued support and belief in me. I so agree with you with our beautiful nature and also about music. Nature, music and poetry go beautifully together! I do like this instrumental piece and am glad that you liked it too.Thank you dear Maria. Have a wonderful weekend my wonderful friend with love and hugs xx
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 5/30/2024 2:02:00 PM
Another thing to add my friend. I love music, perhaps more than poetry, I must say that you chose the best to go with very well. Hugs
Date: 5/29/2024 8:15:00 PM
Hello Christina , such a beautifully sad but exquisitely written poem , every word spoke to me as if I were on the same journey, your poem is a pure delight to read , and is without doubt one to favour . You have a wonderful gift . Danny
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Christina Bowring
Date: 5/30/2024 5:48:00 AM
Dear Daniel, lovely to have you visit. Thank you so much for your thrilling comments which are elevating. Your supportive feedback is a delight to read. An extra big thank you too for faving it of which I’m honoured and appreciative:):)
Date: 5/28/2024 8:36:00 PM
Your magic pe stirs so beauty once again. I am appreciative of your marvelos talent you share so stunningly withall. Thank you!! Pangie Romios
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Christina Bowring
Date: 5/29/2024 3:10:00 AM
Dear Pangie, your wonderful, thoughtful comments warmed my heart with joy. So lovely to have you visit. Thank you so much dear friend. Always appreciated. Hugs and blessings xx
Date: 5/27/2024 9:39:00 AM
Christina, I don't know what superlative that I could add that would say more than to echo the incredible words of praise bestowed already by those far more gifted than me! I am deeply impressed by your lines! Happy Monday!!!
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Christina Bowring
Date: 5/27/2024 10:09:00 PM
Dear Mike, your wonderful comments put a big smile :) on my face. Thank you so much for your thoughtful, generous comments which did make a happy Monday! I consider you to be a very gifted poet! Have a great day. Hugs and blessings xx
Date: 5/26/2024 8:35:00 AM
I loved reading your poem "Misty Blues". Very well written and very beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing.
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Christina Bowring
Date: 5/26/2024 1:53:00 PM
Hello Emily - really nice to meet you. Thank you so much for visiting my page. I’m so glad that you loved reading the poem. Thank you so much! I look forward to visiting you :):)
Date: 5/25/2024 12:27:00 PM
A beautiful and haunting poem, Christina ... The Frank Sinatra song, 'It's A Blue World', came to my mind while reading this ...
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Christina Bowring
Date: 5/26/2024 2:58:00 AM
Thank you so much dear Kelly for your lovely comments. I wasn’t familiar with the song so I listened to it and I can see what you mean with reference to the lyrics. Much appreciated. Blessings to you xx
Date: 5/21/2024 1:55:00 PM
Beautiful writing Christina so vivid and melancholic, great poem
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Christina Bowring
Date: 5/21/2024 11:58:00 PM
Dear Kate, thank you for reading the poem and for leaving supportive comments. I am most appreciative. Have a lovely day :)
Date: 5/21/2024 12:31:00 PM
Gosh Christina, you really tug at the heart strings with this one. You chose the music and image well to compliment the words. I think I just need a moment.. Nice job on all fronts. Blessings S :) x
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Christina Bowring
Date: 5/21/2024 3:15:00 PM
My dear friend Sam, always a joy when you visit. Thank you for sharing your treasured thoughts with me with this more emotional, sombre write. Also, for your continuing supportive presence which is much appreciated. Blessings and smiles :):)
Date: 5/21/2024 9:17:00 AM
Very soul-touching poetry, Christina! Beautifully expressed emotions...
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Christina Bowring
Date: 5/21/2024 3:05:00 PM
Dear Smita, thank you so much for your lovely visit and uplifting comments. Much gratitude and blessings to you xx
Date: 5/21/2024 1:58:00 AM
This poem is so evocative and the melancholy tone of the poem is so touching. The pain created by the loss of love and the deep yearning for your loved one make the poem stand apart. Your poems are characterized by their sincerity of tone and their spontaneous flow. Have a great week ahead, dear Christina !
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Christina Bowring
Date: 5/21/2024 6:43:00 AM
Dear Valsa, I loved reading your in-depth and perceptive comments. Thank you so very much. I truly appreciate it. Such kind, generous and inspiring words for my poems. I am thrilled to read them which are received so warmly. Thank you! Many blessings to you for the rest of the week with hugs xx
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