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I started writing in prep school, and was one of the only students to ever win the Payson-Bird Prize, (for Excellence in English Composition), as a freshman. The professor who gave me the award was an alumni of both Cambride and Oxford, and while I never took his encouragement seriously, he nonetheless saw something special in me at that young age. I wish I had listened to him more intently, but I had too many other interests, (music and girls the most pressing), and I didn't start writing again "seriously" until the Fall of 2016, and joined The Soup in December of that year.

Since then I have enjoyed this community and grown a great deal as a writer, and more importantly, made a number of wonderful friends, for who I am truly thankful. I have been to many other similar sites, but found this one to be the best for me. I try very hard to create original metaphor and fresh, unusual imagery, but do so in ways that make SENSE. I find poems that are stuffed full of "big" or fancy words for the sake of sounding articulate or "deep", to be of little import and interest, but unusual words used in creative and unique ways can be a bonus to good writing, (most intelligent people know the difference).

In contrast, using simple words in unusual ways can be equally as beautiful and unique, and there is an art to that style of application as well, and for those reasons words themselves are fascinating to me. I believe I have been given a gift that enables me to put those words together in ways that elicit emotion, but that the creative intuition and acumen that transforms those elements into beauty and poetic excellence, is something that comes from withOUT - that we are all just tools for a higher power, and that staying in tune with that energy is critical to creativity.

I hope you'll take a moment to read some of my poems, and please leave a comment, if you would be so kind. Blessings!

QARINAGE - Results Posted

Blog Posted:6/10/2018 9:27:00 PM

Some really great entries of a VERY difficult form, and I was impressed by every single poem. Sadly, however, NINE entries did not resemble the form whatsoever, and I have trouble understanding why not, (especially with clear directions AND an example), as syllable counts, rhyme scheme, etc., had no connection at all to what I had asked for. It saddens me, because they were really good writes, but weren't even close ...

There were some with questionable rhyme, syllable counts slightly off, grammar and spelling errors, and the sequence of lines slightly off, but if they were at least ATTEMPTING the form, I placed them, and as I say, ALL were enjoyable reads and had worthy, substantive content. There was a very specific rhythm I was looking for, and the two top poems nailed it ... some came very near ...

It's clear to me that the more involved the directions, the more variations and errors ensue, (and that makes sense), but there are so many wonderfully capable writers here, and despite the nine that I had to disqualify, I enjoyed very much your interpretation of the tempo, and the different directions that you took with the theme. If you'd like specific reasons for placement, Soup Mail me and I will do my best ...

As usual, however, it comes down to whatever hits me the deepest, and small placement differences had to do with small errors in form, rhyme, spelling, grammar, etc.. Thank you SO much for entering my contest - this was a lot of fun! And those who didn't place - PLEASE read the directions in the future, and give yourself a true chance at a win ... it's a very basic thing, and pretty crucial to life in general. Blessings, ALL! :-) <3

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Date: 6/12/2018 2:55:00 PM
thanks for having me on the winners' list, and I really loved your form!!
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 6/16/2018 10:24:00 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea - blessings, My Friend! :-) <3
Date: 6/11/2018 12:08:00 PM
Thanks for setting us a great challenge and for my placement in the contest, such a shame that so many poems didn't fit the criteria as the rules couldn't have been clearer. My congrats to all the winners:-) hugs Jan xx
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 6/16/2018 10:24:00 PM
That's very sweet of you to say, Jan, and I'm so pleased you joined the fun! Blessings, Dear Poet! :-) <3
Date: 6/10/2018 10:34:00 PM
Greg, thank you for a great contest and challenge. I enjoyed writing my poem for you and thank you so much for my placement and congratulations to all your winners ~
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 6/16/2018 10:23:00 PM
My pleasure, Constance - it was a lot of fun! Blessings! :-) <3

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My Recent Poems

Date PostedPoemTitleFormCategories
8/14/2018 Amazon Haikuappreciation,beauty,natur
8/13/2018 Canis Lupus Free verseanimal,loss,nature,
8/13/2018 A Moon's Madness Free versedark,fantasy,moon,passion
8/13/2018 Life's Sweetest Fruit, Hangs Withered on the Vine Free verselife,loneliness,love,meta
8/11/2018 My Five Senses Free verseanalogy,appreciation,beau
8/10/2018 NEVER Just A Cat Free verseanimal,appreciation,cat,l
8/10/2018 Sweet Summer Breeze Lyriclove,passion,summer,
8/10/2018 Intent Free verseanalogy,appreciation,life
8/9/2018 Kimo Therapy Kimobrother,love,
8/8/2018 Juliet, Jilted Limerickhumorous,light,satire,
8/7/2018 What Love Is Acrosticappreciation,love,wisdom,
8/6/2018 A Walk In Solitude Rispettoage,analogy,heartbreak,lo
8/4/2018 Breath To Breath Sonnetanalogy,lost love,metapho
8/4/2018 Sola Veritate Free versespiritual,truth,wisdom,
8/3/2018 What He Gets For Empty Nets Limerickadventure,funny,humorous,
8/1/2018 Black Swan Free verseanalogy,dance,dark,love,m
7/31/2018 Brother, Mine Rhymeappreciation,brother,fami
7/30/2018 Such Does Exist Dramatic Monologueanalogy,appreciation,beau
7/29/2018 Racey Spacey Clerihewcelebrity,corruption,powe
7/26/2018 Untouchable II Rhymeanalogy,poverty,prejudice
7/25/2018 Fallen Down Rhymebeauty,desire,love,lust,p
7/25/2018 Ocean Elegy Haikubereavement,bird,nature,s
7/25/2018 Sleepwalking Sonnetdream,fantasy,memory,reme
7/24/2018 This Moment Free verseappreciation,life,time,wi
7/24/2018 Delicate Dusk Sonnetappreciation,beauty,color
7/22/2018 Ghost Free verseintrospection,loneliness,
7/22/2018 Untouchable Free verseappreciation,beauty,human
7/19/2018 You - Still Free versememory,passion,soulmate,t
7/17/2018 Queequeg - White Water Free verseadventure,fishing,history
7/16/2018 Waking's Weep Free verseappreciation,beauty,longi
7/15/2018 From First Ball to World Cup Free versechildhood,football,soccer
7/15/2018 A Bleeding Hush Tankabetrayal,longing,love,met
7/14/2018 Juneteenth Acrosticappreciation,freedom,huma
7/14/2018 Juneteenth - not for contest Coupletappreciation,community,hu
7/14/2018 A Breath, Bewitched Free verseanalogy,appreciation,love
7/13/2018 A Dance, Delightful Free verseappreciation,joy,nature,o
7/11/2018 Vagabond Free verseanalogy,beauty,passion,se
7/10/2018 In Absentia Stellas Free verseappreciation,beauty,fanta
7/9/2018 Sleep's Mercy Free versedream,fear,sleep,
7/7/2018 Little Things Free verseappreciation,beauty,desir
7/6/2018 Sad, Sweet Slumber Free versedream,lost love,memory,ro
7/4/2018 Missing Muse Rhymeanalogy,muse,poetry,writi
7/1/2018 A Pound's A Pound - Migraine Rhymehealth,pain,stress,
6/30/2018 Uniquely Soundless Free verseintrospection,
6/30/2018 Brain Un-Freeze - 13 Free verseanalogy,beauty,body,metap
6/29/2018 The Equalizer, Love Rhymechange,humanity,love,peac
6/28/2018 Edge of a Whisper Sonnetbreak up,goodbye,heartbre
6/27/2018 I Am But A Mortal Craving Your Existence Rhymeangel,fantasy,introspecti
6/24/2018 Friendship's Bloom Rhymeappreciation,friend,frien
6/24/2018 Wonderfully Wet Rhymebeach,passion,rain,romanc
6/24/2018 Harp's Reverie - Angel in the Rain Quatrainangel,metaphor,music,rain
6/22/2018 Seventh Heaven Blank verseromance,soulmate,true lov
6/22/2018 Ventriloquist Rhymeanalogy,heartbreak,love h
6/19/2018 Sunup Seraph Rhymeappreciation,beauty,love,
6/16/2018 Mister Z Free verseanalogy,life,loss,love hu
6/15/2018 A Burning Bleed Free versedesire,love,love hurts,pa
6/15/2018 Abandon Free verselove,metaphor,moon,passio
6/15/2018 Kiss of Summer Free verseocean,romance,soulmate,su
6/14/2018 Pleiades Verseanalogy,metaphor,sky,star
6/14/2018 A Dark Prescience Haikuanalogy,birth,journey,lif
6/13/2018 Careful What You Ask For Rhymeanalogy,history,life,myst
6/12/2018 Plunge Rhymeappreciation,beauty,desir
6/8/2018 Anthony Bourdain 1956-2018 Free verseappreciation,celebrity,li
6/7/2018 The Gristmill, Life Free verselife,metaphor,wisdom,
6/6/2018 The Way You Walk Free versebeauty,metaphor,sensual,w
6/2/2018 Portent of Perseids Rhymeanalogy,metaphor,soulmate
6/2/2018 The Bends Monokuadventure,beauty,death,oc
5/31/2018 Serrated Monokuheartbreak,loss,love hurt
5/28/2018 haiga - summer Haikubeauty,eve,june,rain,summ
5/27/2018 Her Happy Place Monorhymeappreciation,beach,nature
5/26/2018 Oye, Karin Free versepassion,romance,sensual,s
5/25/2018 Your Pad Or Mine Free versebeauty,fantasy,soulmate,t
5/24/2018 Greener Grass Dramatic Monologueappreciation,beach,life,o
5/22/2018 Little Plush Bunny Rhymeappreciation,childhood,lo
5/22/2018 Oh Phrases, Grand and Furtive Free verselost love,soulmate,time,t
5/17/2018 The Cliche' Of Cliche's Free verseappreciation,love,words,
5/17/2018 Sleeplessness Free verseconflict,depression,emoti
5/16/2018 Summer Love Sonnetlost love,love,romance,su
5/14/2018 The Essence of Soft Shadows Free verseanalogy,appreciation,intr
5/14/2018 Death, Where Are You Rhymedeath,life,ocean,
5/13/2018 Ville Vivante Free verseappreciation,beauty,city,
5/12/2018 Sorry Scoundrel Sonnetlove hurts,passion,wisdom
5/11/2018 Pool Of Me Free verseaddiction,death,introspec
5/11/2018 Listen Free verseappreciation,music,silenc
5/11/2018 Country's Conscience Free verseamerica,corruption,usa,wa
5/9/2018 COMMON Commonality Rhymeappreciation,friendship,l
5/8/2018 Blood And Fire Rhymeconflict,dark,love,passio
5/8/2018 Love, Disordered Free versepassion,sensual,soulmate,
5/8/2018 Still-Billy Bubba Light Verseanalogy,grandfather,humor
5/8/2018 haiga - ocean Haikuappreciation,ocean,sea,
5/7/2018 Infidele Infini Free verseanalogy,betrayal,lost lov
5/6/2018 You Can Call Me Ray Free verseanimal,appreciation,ocean
5/6/2018 Wise, Asp Free verseanalogy,animal,beauty,met
5/3/2018 Chrysalis Free verseanalogy,change,metaphor,s
5/1/2018 Love, Tousled Free verselove,passion,romance,sens
4/30/2018 The Ultimate VR Dramatic Monologuecomputer,death,fantasy,sc
4/29/2018 From Us, To Dust Sijoheartbreak,lost love,love
4/27/2018 haiku - catalpa Haikubeauty,nature,tree,
4/27/2018 An Angel, Unknown Dramatic Verse11th grade,angel,autumn,c
4/27/2018 Sign of the Times Acrosticappreciation,hate,humanit

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Fav Poems

A Midsummer Night's Beach Free versebeauty,color,creation,sea
Valentine May My Love Say Dizaindesire,devotion,love,roma
Highveld Storm Rhymebreak up,longing,
The World Around US Rhymeearth,environment,war,
The Ride Iambic Pentameterimagination,memory,sad,
Never Shame a Woman Quatrainpassion,women,
Life or Death Tweet Prosebirth,death,
Cry For Wind Quatrainanalogy,animal,beautiful,
Love of Nature Coupletnature,
AURORA AT DAWN Rhymebeauty,inspirational,morn
My Big Fat Gypsy Poem Rhymehumor,marriage,wedding,
A Prince for Roseanne Rhymefantasy,
Picture Perfect Rhymeamerica,corruption,deep,p
It don't really matter Rhymefun,humor,love,
BEHIND CLOSED DOORS - EMOTIVE WRITE Rhymeabuse,bullying,house,lone
Broken Soldiers Rhymeage,humanity,soldier,
I DANCE Prose Poetryabuse,dance,music,pain,
Love will come to you Lyricintrospection,longing,lov
Violin Free verselonely,muse,romance,roman
Gutter Pavement Runway Flight Free verseaddiction,appreciation,da
The Potter and the clay Narrativechange,character,conflict
Worlds Of Ice Free versedream,love,memory,sleep,w
May Showers Contest Haikunature,rain,
Time Lost In The Current Verseemotions,fear,ocean,
Yet not broken by the blues Free verseanti bullying,holocaust,m
Lost Childhood -Part 4- Rhymeabuse,child,child abuse,c
Freedom Is Written In Stars And Moon Free verseabuse,change,dark,freedom
Diamonds From The Sky Blank versebeautiful,beauty,desire,e
Starshine and silhouettes Rhymebeauty,dance,desire,image
Hollow man Rhymehappiness,introspection,i
From glory to dust-2 Acrosticangst,confusion,corruptio
Rainless Clouds Pantoumblue,sad,
Landscape - Beach Scene Quatrainart,
What Poetry Is Free verseimagery,poetry,words,
A Candid Rainscape Free verseflower,imagery,nature,rai
White Rainbows Imagismcolor,garden,imagery,
Amethyst Fate Ottava rimaflower,imagery,metaphor,
Love Lies Bleeding Rispettoflower,metaphor,
TOUCH -Sharon's Acrostic contest Acrosticspiritual,
my solitary wandering Free versememory,solitude,
MAWU AMONGST STARS Sonnetbeauty,magic,memory,
Real Men Wear Pink Rhymecharacter,funny,humor,per
POETS Rhymeappreciation,encouraging,
Sea of Love Rhymelove,love hurts,sea,
Collateral damage Dramatic monologuecharacter,courage,freedom
The Pearl Free versebeauty,blue,love,moon,nig
Morning Cues Versebeautiful,
Words-The Heart of Imagination Free verseuniverse,words,
He Has My Heart Verseart,longing,lust,passion,
July Free versesummer,
Transition to Death - Part I Free verseabsence,anger,dark,death,
as cold sudden rain Haikulove,nature,
In Silence Personificationautumn,death,
O, the murmuring waves -- Versespiritual,
A Kiss Remembered Rhymelove,
For the Fisher King on His Golden Jubilee Sonnetbirthday,friend,
NEVER TO BE MINE Free versegrief,i miss you,memorial
Snow Falling Personificationbeauty,winter,
Realization Sonnetlife,
You Echo, Silent Still Free verselost love,
DESPICABLE Free verseabuse,evil,girl,
The Stars and Beyond Sestinaspace,stars,
For the Love of Poetry Blank versepoetry,poets,words,
Rape Free verseabuse,
ulan at sinag ng araw: pagmumuni ng isang tulirong isip Free verseangst,feelings,introspect
Chasing the man in the moon Free verseabsence,childhood,father
Miss Allegheny Mountain Monorhymeimagery,mountains,nature,
Mister Joe Jangles Free versepoetry,poets,
I am Every Woman Biobeauty,deep,emotions,enco
GOODBYE, MY LOVE Versedeath,goodbye,
LAKE'S MUSIC Free versepeace,river,song,
Moonlight tango Dramatic monologuedance,desire,men,moon,rom
Shadow Free verselost love,
If I Let My Mind Meander Free verselost love,metaphor,
What Might Have Been Verselost love,
Late Summer Nights Dream at the Cat in the Hat Coupletimagination,nonsense,
46 Free versebereavement,brother,love,
INDIAN PIPE Blank versedeath,nature,
Collecting teardrops Free versefriendship,lost,
Under the Stars Verseautumn,poetry,romance,sta
Be Yourself Free verseconfusion,courage,emotion
HIS EVENING'S MYSTERY Lyriclove,mystery,
As I Journey East Free versebeauty,journey,
a night of passion Couplethappiness,lust,passion,ro
As the Year Matures Monorhymejune,
When I No Longer Love You Romanticismlove,romance,
Fated Hell Monorhymedeath,destiny,evil,
Love's Eternal Death Sonnetemotions,lost love,
One Last Time Free verselost love,
Prisoner Of Words Free versemetaphor,poetry,words,
Laws Of Attraction Free verseabuse,addiction,forgivene
When Her Roses Bloom Romanticismlost love,rose,
Crystal Blue Waters Rhymenature,
Poetry Rhymeart,meaningful,poetry,poe
Nestled Under Your Wings Free verseimagery,inspirational,upl
A Chorus Sang Its Last Concerto Elegybeach,emotions,
Dance of the Firebird Free versebeautiful,dance,sensual,
AUTUMN ROYAL Rhyme royalautumn,sad,
Snow Birds Softly Sing Versebeautiful,bird,dance,dece
Midnight Romance Sonnetdesire,dream,imagery,long

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