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Love Lies Bleeding

Amaranthus weeps in Summer's first burning.
Tears hang suspended from a fracturing heart.
Lost vermillion dreams leave memories churning,
scarlet seeping from the wound of Cupid's dart.

Mourning can heal and be a time of learning,
to once again partake of love's crimson art.
And yet he cannot for from Spring's first seeding
he is destined to live as Love Lies Bleeding.


7/5/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Canerdy Avatar
July 8, 2017 at 8:58 AM
Dale, this is is so lovely and moving! Congrats on your win. Janice
Cozart Avatar
July 8, 2017 at 9:05 AM
Thanks very much, Janice. I'm glad you liked it.
Barden Avatar
July 3, 2017 at 8:51 PM
Extraordinary write, Dale - this is going on my fav list as well. "Amaranthine" is one of my favorite words, and few know the story behind it. I also have three bleeding heart bushes around my house, and they are special to me. Love the dark edge to this as well ... nice work!
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July 3, 2017 at 10:53 AM
So romantically creative this Rispetto poem be, Dale. Beautiful write. Love and more love to you and yours.
Cozart Avatar
July 3, 2017 at 11:00 AM
Thanks, Freddie. This was my first try at the form.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 3, 2017 at 9:12 AM
A lovely Rispetto! Love the first line!
Cozart Avatar
July 3, 2017 at 9:15 AM
Thanks very much, Kim.
Wood Avatar
July 3, 2017 at 8:58 AM
Another beautiful poem. I am in awe. - Dean
Cozart Avatar
July 3, 2017 at 9:14 AM
Thanks, Dean!
Turner Avatar
July 2, 2017 at 11:53 AM
Nicely penned, Dale. Very descriptive. Good luck!
Cozart Avatar
July 2, 2017 at 11:57 AM
Thanks a lot, Daniel.
Guzzi Avatar
July 1, 2017 at 10:29 PM
Nice contest entry, keep them coming! Light & Love
Cozart Avatar
July 2, 2017 at 11:57 AM
Thanks, Debbie!
Sands Avatar
July 1, 2017 at 4:48 PM
Wow Dale, this is so moving ! Very well done :)
Cozart Avatar
July 1, 2017 at 4:52 PM
Thanks, Heidi! First Rispetto and I enjoyed it.
Allison Avatar
July 1, 2017 at 12:48 PM
wow Dale you pulled me in with the title as it's one of my favourite Elton John tracks - having googled the flower your description and personification is superb:-) hugs jan xx
Allison Avatar
July 1, 2017 at 6:37 PM
As I type the DJ on Manx radio is playing me funeral for a friend and love lies bleeding!:-) If you don't know the track its very powerful music:-) hugs Jan xx
Cozart Avatar
July 1, 2017 at 12:54 PM
Thanks, Jan. My first stab at this form.
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