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You Echo, Silent Still

"I closed my mouth and spoke to you in a hundred silent ways" - Rumi


You were there      and I was there
        no one else to interrupt our silence
          
Closing my mouth, I inhaled deeply
         the scent of your cologne
 Intoxication -  a sublime surrender of the sense
 as I let my fingers trace the path  my eyes had blazed
                            across your face
and you reciprocated, mirroring my touch
               as your lips and fingers lighted
 reverently     on my cheeks, my eyes, my mouth

The thrill of new love
               hung deliciously 
                               in beauty’s hush  around us
A hundred ways I must have touched your face
                  as a hundred kisses you were placing
      up and down my neck 
                        above and beneath my ear lobes

Silent shivers of anticipation made way  at last
for the softness of your sweet mouth  
                                                    on mine
                                                               

Young love, so wondrous, so fresh -
    you echo - silent still
                               in the caverns
                                                  of my fondest recollections
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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George Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 3:48 AM
A deeply romantic poem of youthful love. One would like to fondle those sweet memories even after. Congratulations Andrea on your placement in the Marathon Mile race.
Watts Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 6:27 PM
Hi Andrea A well-deserved wining place with this lovely poem. Flowed nicely to read. Congrats Cheers Christine
Toney Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 2:15 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your top 10 win on Mile 26 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. The 2025 Poetry Marathon Qualifiers' FINAL Placement Contest will begin soon after all Qualifiers Have Been Notified by Soup Mail. For more information see my Mile 26 Checkpoint blog.
Dietrich Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 2:45 PM
oh my goodness. I am surprised. I felt recently like I was in a sinking ship . thanks so much, Mark. I will go see my placement now and the other info you mentioned here.
Barden Avatar
September 7, 2017 at 4:19 AM
I adore this poem, Andrea, and my favorite genre as well, (as you probably know) ... this is written in perfect sensual sublimity, and I must fav! Blessings and congrats on your win! :-) <3
A   Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 9:09 PM
hi, Andrea, Congrats on your Best love poem #3 win. Hugs --- LINDA ---
A. Sharma Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 4:55 AM
Congrats on yet another awesome win with this wonderful write Andrea.
Canerdy Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 10:34 PM
Richly romantic, Andrea! Congrats on your win. Janice
A  Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 10:24 PM
Andrea, Congratulations on your Best love poem win. Thank you for the support **SKAT**
A. Sharma Avatar
August 11, 2015 at 10:35 PM
Congrats on ur awesome poetry n win Andrea!
Callus Avatar
August 11, 2015 at 5:50 PM
Sensual and romantic; the thrill and taste of new love. A lovely recollection of youthful days! ~ Congrats on a deserving win, Andrea! // paul
Y. Avatar
August 11, 2015 at 5:16 PM
Andrea, congrats on your win:-) Alexis
Roper Avatar
August 11, 2015 at 11:07 AM
Congratulations on your win hugs eve
A  Avatar
August 11, 2015 at 10:38 AM
Congratulations, Andrea.... Always ~SKAT~
Inman Avatar
August 11, 2015 at 8:36 AM
Wonderful, Andrea, 17 hunh, heck of a date to still be so vivid in your mind.
Babcock Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 10:00 AM
wow awesome romantic write. love phyl going into my fav
La France Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 11:00 PM
Andrea, this is so beautiful. I really like how you did this free verse, a impressive 7 and congratulations and thanks for visiting my poem, missing Linda ...
Martin Avatar
May 13, 2015 at 3:49 PM
Beautiful, Andrea! Like use of thismform!
Sirak Avatar
May 13, 2015 at 3:31 PM
Wow! Absolutely stunning! The last lines continue to echo in the mind.
Ryerson Avatar
May 12, 2015 at 2:55 PM
Lordy me Andrea...Here I was thinking this was a true experience and was fixin to ask who the lucky fella was. Whew! I LOVE it when you show your romantic and sensual side and to be honest, some of your best work comes from these type of poems ( In my opinion) BIG and sexy congrats my friend...
Dietrich Avatar
May 12, 2015 at 3:19 PM
Tim, thanks, and you were right the first time. It is based on the best date I ever had, age 17. I will never forget it. AT least half my love poems are based off this one guy!
Kendrick Avatar
May 12, 2015 at 2:53 PM
Back with congrats..Sara
Das Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 10:24 PM
A beautiful poem. Congratulations on your win.
Haight Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 10:23 AM
Very romantic and lovely, Andrea. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Sandra
Carmack Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 1:54 AM
Congrats Andrea, I love the last line.
Vaso Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 11:34 PM
This is so, well Rumi!!!!! :) Loved it!
May Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 7:25 PM
A beautiful poem I especially liked the last stanza...Congrats on your win
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