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Diamonds From the Sky

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He looks of far and in between White hair with diamonds from the sky A wood of wiry glow around Expressive fingers, braiding braids Forgotten strands of gold-spun hair His feet swept pebbles in the surf Small indentations filled with silt With every look I hoped to see His eyes on me with how I wished To will his want to be for me Be loved without a shred of doubt To have his golden eyes on me To magic shameful into proud *** © Darren White 4 foot iambic blank verse

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 6/21/2017 4:59:00 PM

Beautiful love poem, my friend ... sensitive and endearing. The focused vision of passion and love - we see others so differently when their every move is a song ... a story we long to read. Love this!

Darren White
Date: 6/21/2017 10:01:00 PM

Yes, a dream like love, not very realistic, but still :)

Sara Ella

Date: 3/7/2017 10:07:00 PM

I love the rhythm of this poem and more I wish that your wishes come true <3

Darren White
Date: 3/7/2017 11:41:00 PM

Yes, so do I :) <3

Scarlett Hanley

Date: 3/7/2017 8:53:00 AM

Well written. The use of simple vocabulary simply made it extraordinary.

Darren White
Date: 3/7/2017 8:59:00 AM

Thank you, I agree that is very effective :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/7/2017 8:35:00 AM

- Beautiful written, Darren - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darren White
Date: 3/7/2017 8:38:00 AM

Thank you so much, Anne-Lise

Chris Green

Date: 3/7/2017 8:25:00 AM

This was really nicely done my friend. The emotions have a life of their own in this wonderful piece of writing. I am not familiar with this form, but you seen to be very well versed on it. No pun intended. :)

Darren White
Date: 3/7/2017 8:30:00 AM

Haha :D What I love about iambic blank verse, is that it has that cadence of rhyme, but it doesn't rhyme. You don't notice it doesn't if you do the iambic blank verse the right way. Thatks Chris :)

Lisa Ricci

Date: 3/7/2017 4:02:00 AM

Hi Darren. Beautiful thoughts. Exceptional poetry. This is exquisite throughout.

Darren White
Date: 3/7/2017 4:05:00 AM

Thank you so much Lisa. I love iambic blank verse. For some reason it suits me so well :)