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like a hush … sentinel … the old willow stood guard his branches, stout arms that held her safe in childhood supple limbs hugged and flexed whene'er she sought blue sky his embrace of lush fronds let no rain wet her brow ... their sweep offering but a kiss of gentle breath and cool shade in the heavy press of Summer heat while shimmering strands of light illumed her play time … all her life he had gallantly charged her safety but oh, how he weeped now from his twisted old roots as to-and-fro she swayed at the end … of a rope. Copyright © Gregory R Barden, September 22, 2017

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Date: 9/24/2023 12:16:00 PM
Ditto to Mark's comment, well done dear poet!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/20/2023 10:31:00 PM
Thank you so kindly, my old friend! :o)
Date: 9/23/2023 9:56:00 AM
Such an elegant tragedy. This is exceptional - but only to be expected from the talent who penned it.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/20/2023 10:30:00 PM
So pleased you enjoyed it, Mark, thank you so much!!

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