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Laws of Attraction

Mind over matter

      It seems the mind
      is more forgiving
      than the matter

Love at first sight
Magnets inseparable 
Believing true love could
Conquer anything
but anything butt up against matter
Hard enough Long enough
turns out
is enough is enough
for matter to shift
Attraction becomes Repulsion
leaving
Mind over matter

      The mind forgiving
      matter not forgetting

Both hoping time will heal the wounds

Copyright © Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart | Year Posted 2017

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Robert Lindley Date: 10/16/2017 12:29:00 PM Love this intriguing and thoughtful and very fine presentation of love, heartaches, headaches and relationship. I hope Time heals and GOD BLESSES THEE... Magnificent verse my friend.. A fav... Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 10/16/2017 1:29:00 PM Thank you so much Robert. The ink for this one flows from deep, I am moved to be so received. Thank you for the fave. Bless :) xomo!

Bl Devnath Date: 9/20/2017 10:15:00 AM It's a nice poem based on logical analysis of mind's actions and reactions in our life. Beautifully expressed, my lovely dear friend. Loved always, bl Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 9/20/2017 1:27:00 PM Thank you so much Bl, bless xomo!

Bernard Chan Date: 8/26/2017 10:23:00 PM The logical language masking the undercurrent of sadness and pain is truly inspired. Brilliant write! Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 8/27/2017 12:15:00 AM Thank you Bernard, you gift inspiration with your generous comment xomo

Phyllis Babcock Date: 8/11/2017 12:00:00 PM That sounds very logical on the law of attraction and the possible outcome of forgiving but not forgetting. love phyl Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 8/14/2017 9:07:00 AM Polarity does shift. :) xomo

Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 8/11/2017 10:11:00 AM Very keen insights given such depth by poetic logic, Maureen. A true poet's poem. Excellent thought provoking pen expressions. Love and joy always, dear. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 8/14/2017 9:07:00 AM Thank you Dear :) xomo!

Jack Ellison Date: 8/9/2017 3:04:00 PM A good write Mo!!! Melancholy and soul searching! Love and hugs, Jack xxx Login to Reply

Patricia Cresswell Date: 8/9/2017 9:37:00 AM A melancholy piece. Hard lesson learned. Well written. (second reading) Login to Reply

Ralph Sergi Date: 8/6/2017 7:06:00 PM beautiful introspection, Maureen: Matter doesn't matter. Login to Reply

Lim'Rik Flats Date: 8/6/2017 4:50:00 PM Blew my mind... but it doesn't matter;-) Seriously, NICE! ~ j Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 8/6/2017 10:25:00 PM ;) xomo!

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/6/2017 3:13:00 PM - Awesome, Maureen ... woow - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 8/6/2017 10:30:00 PM Thank You Sunshiniest Smile! ;) xomo!!

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri Date: 8/6/2017 10:22:00 AM Nice play on words. Creatively musing here wow. Attraction becomes repulsion, yeah that seems to be the law of love nowadays I swear what I hear of many couples in different parts of the world. Your poem is superb. Kudos. Nice to read from u again. Pls do write your thoughts about my latest poem too, under it. Login to Reply

Patricia Cresswell Date: 8/6/2017 10:12:00 AM It is so true. The tremendous pressure we put on love to fit our dreams. Your poem reminded me of that as I read. Cautioned me in fact to have no expectations and just love. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 8/6/2017 10:27:00 PM Your wisdom rings true. Right now I'm just wrestling with at what cost.

Vijay Pandit Date: 8/5/2017 6:04:00 PM Thought provoking! Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 8/6/2017 7:37:00 AM Awesome :) thank you Vijay! xomo

James Swartz Date: 8/5/2017 4:02:00 PM Yes this is GREAT! Attraction becomes repulsion. Love it! Another great great read Maureen. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 8/6/2017 7:38:00 AM *blush* thank you James :) xomo!

Jack Ellison Date: 8/5/2017 8:35:00 AM Read your comment to Russell... "Even my coffee is richer and sweeter this morning!" Love it and am surely impressed with your write, dear Mo!!! Love Jacko!!! xxx Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 8/5/2017 8:49:00 AM Thank You dear Jackson! Love and squishy hugs to you :) xomo!

Heidi Sands Date: 8/5/2017 6:58:00 AM The experiences we have in life and always learning! Well done Maureen :) Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 8/5/2017 7:14:00 AM Thank you Heidi :) So true, and I've met some lost souls, lost as they refuse to learn. "Ya can't teach someone who already knows everything" ;) xomo!

Russell Sivey Date: 8/5/2017 4:48:00 AM Wow, such a dynamic write, full of emotional turmoil! I truly enjoyed reading this astounding poem this morning, you have impressed me by your spectacular quill! What a grandiose piece, Great Work!! Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 8/5/2017 6:41:00 AM Russell, your comments are always rich with encouragement I must thank you whole heartedly! Even my coffee is richer and sweeter this morning ;) Thank You! xomo

Sunita U.D Palawon Date: 8/5/2017 3:37:00 AM Oh you brought a very new angle to the law of attraction. A physic lesson indeed! :D :D Well done Maureen. :) Sunita Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 8/5/2017 6:38:00 AM :D (!) Thank You Sunita! Lovely day to you xomo

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/5/2017 3:13:00 AM Bad experience may hurt but still teaches us of how to go about next time! If inventors were giving up after their unsuccessful initial efforts there would not be...computers today for us to communicate! Haha. Beautiful philosophical writing dearest, Maureen! Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 8/5/2017 6:37:00 AM Too true! My personal motto "no regrets", always learning; even if that means repeating a lesson or two ;) thank you dear poet, I am graced xomo!

Winged Warrior Date: 8/5/2017 2:06:00 AM Nicely penned my friend...the struggle continues...god bless...^WW^ Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 8/5/2017 6:32:00 AM Yes it does; I'm so damn stubborn ;) xomo!

Gregory Richard Barden Date: 8/4/2017 11:32:00 PM I LOVE this Maureen - so much hard truth here, put into exquisite phrasing and tempo ... fav-ing this. I haven't said this here before, (though it's intimated in my work), but I am a recovered addict, addicted over 30 years, and while it's something I have written of many times, it needs even MORE attention ... and discussion. Thank you for this - just wonderful! Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 8/5/2017 6:25:00 AM I am honoured Greg, more than you could know. While I have had my problems with addiction, loving an addict is something else. I would rather be writing love poems. My body has endured much trauma, however cognizant of the disease and understanding and forgiving I be, the body remembers. Mind over matter I quit tobacco and pot cold turkey, but I can't turn my body back on. Thank you again :) xomo