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this man tries hard with word to weave his loves clear worn plain ‘pon his sleeve not meant as gripes midst rationed fears but more shall quell those metered tears his pen thus bleeds for loves quite lost one heart born bare for scheming’s cost still oft’ he dreams now chances slim someone will write sweet poems … for him. Copyright © Gregory Richard Barden, June 12, 2023

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Date: 7/8/2023 11:27:00 PM
Wonderful write, so soothing , yet heartfelt.
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Date: 7/3/2023 3:55:00 AM
You are a master of thought and meter!
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Date: 6/27/2023 1:47:00 PM
Truly s magnificent poem! The tops of succinct speaking a volume with striking imagery, distinct characterization, truly touching end. Fav! Your work deserves more notice…go about more! Hugs, sally
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Date: 6/25/2023 6:38:00 AM
Gregory my good friend. So good to hear from you again. You gave us such a sweet poem about your beloved father! I think you and I were both greatly blessed to have had such wonderful dads. God bless you my friend. This fine poem is a dear fav for me. .
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