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If I Let My Mind Meander


If I let my mind meander - like a river backwards through time - past rocks and turbulent waters and also through the calm times when the surface of that river was smooth as glass - I go further back to a time when my life flowed like a stream, less complex and rolling on with hope. Always, though, I end up at the source - at that place of splendid sweetness where the water was a clear fresh spring bursting forth to feed the passion of a glorious waterfall. And always I remember you, sweet darling, as the shimmer of the sunlight on that fresh and sparkling mountain spring. April 2, 2017 For More To Me Poetry Contest Sponsor: William Kekaula

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Date: 7/9/2019 5:25:00 AM
I just love this title. It pulls me in. Then I see your sweet story, one of love remembered. Terrifically intimate piece. Congratulations.
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Date: 6/27/2019 9:30:00 PM
Congrats!! on the win Andrea...should have placed higher my friend...^WW^
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Date: 6/27/2019 2:08:00 PM
Back with congrats on your win, Andrea.
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Date: 6/27/2019 11:18:00 AM
My heartfelt thanks for your entry Andrea, to my sponsored contest and indeed, my compliments to your placement, Aloha ~ William
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Date: 4/15/2018 2:31:00 PM
Good one, Andrea.
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Date: 11/13/2017 9:11:00 PM
Ew, la, la - so romantic and sparkling with sweetness! A JOY to read. You have grown 2 pages of poems since I was gone. Does my desire to catch make me an optimist? Stay tuned. Love ya ... CayCay
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Date: 8/7/2017 11:39:00 AM
Such a refreshing write. This was indeed a great idea to make the contrast of love with nature. Congrats Andrea! :)
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Date: 8/6/2017 8:49:00 AM
Excellent poem Andrea. A "glorious waterfall" of words. I love it
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Date: 8/5/2017 11:06:00 PM
Exquisite, as always, Andrea - tenderly penned with care and emotion, as a lost love should be, in my opinion. We are so lucky to have had such muses, when so many never find true love. I adore this and I'm fav-ing - blessings, Friend, and congrats! :-) <3
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Date: 8/5/2017 6:45:00 PM
Congratulations my friend! I am so happy we both made the list. It is an honor to be in your company! This is lovely! : )
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Date: 8/5/2017 5:00:00 PM
so beautiful romantic Andrea I'm so glad to see this meander onto the winners list:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/5/2017 11:13:00 AM
Hi Andrea, tender and beautiful. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 8/4/2017 2:36:00 PM
Congratulations on this beauty making the list Andrea! : )
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Date: 8/4/2017 12:18:00 PM
This is just beautiful writing Andrea, I see this won before, confirming what I knew, this is a winner, congrats on a fine placement!
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Date: 4/14/2017 10:58:00 AM
A gem of a poem. Congrats on your win. 7 and a fav.
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Date: 4/12/2017 10:19:00 AM
This is so lovely, Andrea. Just love it. And, congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/9/2017 8:30:00 AM
Coming back with congrats.
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Date: 4/8/2017 6:12:00 PM
A wonderful peaceful poem that inspires calm and allows ones thoughts to dreamily float to a time and place of love and happiness. Beautiful writing Andrea :-) thank you for a lovely blissful moment. a fave, 7+ lynnxxx
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Date: 4/7/2017 11:53:00 AM
Beautiful imagery.Love it!
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Date: 4/6/2017 9:12:00 AM
Sweet,smooth and beautiful write, dear Andrea.
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Date: 4/4/2017 3:45:00 PM
Righteous, Andrea. : ) "If I Let My Mind Meander" = makes me want to write a blues tune....
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Date: 4/4/2017 12:02:00 AM
beautiful.... it takes wit to write this...
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Date: 4/3/2017 8:31:00 PM
You're title caught my eye, sweetie pie.... been some time since I've read "meander" ...this is really sweet and romantic and you've really managed to give water a special meaning for the speaker :) btw, thank you, I buckled with what you said and made some resurface...but they have an expiry, haha
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Date: 4/3/2017 6:20:00 PM
You had me at the title. Beautiful imagery. Love it. 7
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Date: 4/3/2017 2:50:00 PM
lovely... lovely lovely. well penned
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