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I do not have to go far away but just look within canada to see there is starvation poverty and death now, this will never be taught in schools but not a secret that our first prime minister sir john a macdonald starved the aboriginal people into submission deliberately to clear a path for the canadian pacific railway his national dream . . . it was not enough that fur traders brought diseases small pox measles influenza but they hunted the wildlife almost to extinction in time the crystal clear waters were polluted leaving the aboriginals starving and desperate the government withheld food until the first nation people agreed to live on reservations designated areas trapped and humiliated unable to leave they could not farm not hunt not fish in time dependent on the government for food and if they complained the substandard food rations were cut often the food was contaminated anyways children died many died sir john boasted proudly of the indigenous people "on the verge of actual starvation" some hero and even today 2017 there is widespread poverty starvation on first nation reserves in canada infant mortality, no running water, NO access to drinking water (laced with e coli) high price food brought by air imagine, $25.00 for a loaf of bread living on welfare (with no way out) no education little heat in the freezing canadian winters teenage suicide on the rise - a national disaster prejudice and discrimination to this day oh no I do not have to go far to see starvation slum conditions overcrowding sewage backups garbage and broken houses and extreme poverty it is a national disgrace (in canada) oh yes there are some sanitized reservations there are some really pretty places they show off but still there are many not so nice but canada is always ready to step up and help others (look in your own backyard) first mr prime minister it is a horrible situation with hopelessness and what is the answer to that circle that goes on and on, since sir john a macdonald stole their land their way of life their culture and even their children to provincial schools that abused the children, yeah lets pay them into silence the government of canada should be ashamed to allow this in this day and age of abundance in my country- ____________________________ November 13, 2017 Poetry/Free Verse/The Dark Side Of Canada Copyright Protected, ID 17-9609-61-0 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, In The Name Of Country The Dark Side of Nationalism sponsor, Debbie Guzzi First Place

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Date: 12/9/2017 4:16:00 PM
This is quite a piece, Constance, and I can see why it's at the top! Well-done - congratulations on your win, my friend ... blessings, and keep writing on! :-)
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Date: 11/28/2017 4:01:00 AM
Wow I wasn't aware of that BW...Very sad ...Congrats on your win
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Date: 11/27/2017 10:29:00 AM
So very sad. Something I did not know about :( Congrats!
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Date: 11/27/2017 2:47:00 AM
A deeply moving write BW. It would not be difficult to find this type of treatment in any country in the world, the Native Americans in the US, the Aboriginal People of Australia, the Rohingya in Myanmar.
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Date: 11/27/2017 12:35:00 AM
My dear friend. Thank you for your bold and candid write. Little surprises me anymore, but I am often drawn to tears by what I see and hear. How can I say this? Each tear in my eyes have two sides. One side cries for the stony heart of mankind. The other side cries tears of joy for people with hearts like yours who dare to care and share the truth. Much love my friend.
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Date: 11/26/2017 9:42:00 PM
Marvelous write, Broken Wings, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 11/26/2017 8:34:00 PM
Thank you as always for the marvelous effort you put & care into each verse you write, congrad's, Light & Love
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Date: 11/27/2017 2:10:00 PM
Debbie, thanks for this contest where I could express my anger and frustration at the treatment of the First Nations of Canada, and I am so honored with my first place !
Date: 11/26/2017 7:33:00 PM
Very happy to see that you and this wonderful write won the top spot, Constance, as this was my favorite of those that I've read in this category. Very thoughtful and intelligent write, and I can tell a lot of work went into it. Blessings, Dear friend, and sincere congratulations! Keep up your winning ways and great writes - I'm fav-ing this! :-) <3
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Date: 11/14/2017 7:44:00 AM
An excellent penning of the tip of that iceberg Constance. That residential schools have only been closed a few years, our past is not yet our past enough. I am angry that I didn't learn about them while I was in school and angrier still that they were still operational while I was in school. I'm not as proud a Canadian as I used to be. <3
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Date: 11/13/2017 4:07:00 PM
This sure does show the dark side. Well written to show what you see and good luck in the contest!
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Date: 11/13/2017 3:42:00 PM
WOW! Never knew the hardship depicted in your poem--thanks for highlighting the plight of so many--even today--best for a win, BW!
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