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he stood … atop another world another … promethean creation ineffable beauty and innovation spread at his feet like a glorious carpet of progress a macrocosm of concept and imagination that surprised even HIM he had, again, exceeded his own undefinable ingenuity and prospect and the result took his breath but are gods truly thus if they’re unpredictable stochastic, even - if they’re capable of astonishment?!? he must have expected this deep-down … what’s the point of genesis if it’s not to improve or at least applaud? he spread his arms and gaze swept it all in with a breath such incredible accomplishment such grace and grandeur yet … now must come the little creatures to behold it all to adulate and worship to extoll what was to him but a waggle of his finger poor little things he pitied them, really (though he thought THEM marvels … once) to be so … insignificant - so lamentable and small and … well … limited … but they DID serve an objective for without their rather pathetic existence he’d be left with a question unanswerable only one … why?? Copyright © Gregory Richard Barden, July 18, 2023

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Date: 9/11/2023 4:58:00 AM
My good friend, your poetry is on another level. Quite brilliant in my estimation. This is a true gem and a fine fav for me. God bless you.
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Date: 8/21/2023 4:28:00 AM
Truly poetic thoughts - like a wreath of ponder - does God think or does he simply know, do we entertain or frustrate him - he is all powerful and could be alone if he wished but...is loneliness worse than consternation? Great write!
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Date: 7/30/2023 1:34:00 AM
Gregory you know I always loved your poems but I know what you mean about needing to interact with the community here. Regardless, please keep ‘em comin’.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/18/2023 3:43:00 AM
Thank you so very kindly, Jean!
Date: 7/24/2023 1:06:00 PM
Gregarious, still plugging away? Love this. Really, all your poetry excels. I would argue that the Creator is just as enthralled with each creation as we are, perhaps even moreso since he has a vested interest in each and every one - see Psalm 145:16
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/24/2023 11:09:00 PM
Really glad this one “hoked” you guys … I get very little love here anymore, as I just don’t have the time to be as involved as I was. Maybe someday again.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/24/2023 11:06:00 PM
Thank you so very kindly for the comments, Sir Tom, I greatly appreciate it! I love that you got something of religious substance from this, as I often write in layers and ambiguity, but my intent had very little to do with God or even A god, but more about our worth not coming from how we view ourselves, but in what we do for others. So far everyone has gotten something their very own from this poem, and I absolutely LOVE that! There is no wrong answer to the “why?”. Blessings, my friend!
Date: 7/23/2023 5:47:00 AM
The title hoked me and the poem ...WOW I often wonder "what was He thinking?"
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/24/2023 1:04:00 PM
I'm hoked ;)

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