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A Lullaby

Moon dust shines from afar, captured in a moment too brief- Solstice of Winter; a bright sparkling star, barren branches always wither, alleviate my poor senses, come hither, and bring sincere relief. Willows weeping under the moon, all things of clarity gone too soon- come find ease, may my sorrow cease, and sing me a soft lullaby tune. Constellations mourn, and I am near, they know not what they did wrong- Solstice of Winter have no fear, for I have been chosen to bring purity, free you from all insecurity, sing you a gentle lullaby song. Crystalline falling stars, they collide, as I hold all this deep anguish inside- Come find ease, may my sorrow cease… for at least I know I’ve tried. January 8th, 2018

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Date: 1/19/2018 11:54:00 PM
Sincere congratulations on your well-deserved win, Luloo, this is just marvelous! So many images and heart-pleasing phrases, (and oh those celestial bodies!). I have to fav this one - blessings and keep up the wonderful work! :-)
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/20/2018 2:28:00 AM
thank you sweet Greg:)-luloo
Date: 1/18/2018 12:04:00 PM
Beautifully penned dear Luloo :) Congratulations !!! ~Judy
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/20/2018 2:28:00 AM
many thanks sweet lady ;)-luloo
Date: 1/17/2018 8:24:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your very well deserved win, Laura.
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/20/2018 2:27:00 AM
thank you again lovely Line ;)-luloo
Date: 1/17/2018 7:39:00 PM
Laura, congratulations on your win ! Hugs Eve
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/20/2018 2:27:00 AM
thank you sweet Eve :)-luloo
Date: 1/17/2018 3:45:00 PM
Beautiful, Laura Loo, thank you for entering my recent contest. Congratulations on your Awesome win. <3 SKAT
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/17/2018 7:30:00 PM
thank you so much SKAT :) Have a great day -luloo
Date: 1/9/2018 6:25:00 AM
this is really heartfelt, you did it so well... I cold feel the emotions... Excellent poem Laura...
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/9/2018 8:26:00 AM
thank you dear man : )-lullooo
Date: 1/8/2018 8:50:00 PM
Touching poem, Laura... as if you know how to write any other kind !!
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/9/2018 8:26:00 AM
thank you sweet Line for all your kindness :) -luloo
Date: 1/8/2018 1:52:00 PM
Luloo, I always enjoy reading your beautiful poetry, you never disappoint. John
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