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Shine

late on the night preceding Christmas Day
I glimpsed a ghostly shimmer on the snow
and though the moon was shining in its way
'twas something more compelling in this glow

deep in it, I could see the course of years
the strains and pains of humankind, thereof
to search the dearer christening of tears
and change the flow of time to render love

my eyes were sore afraid at such a sight
and so, too, in my heart there grew a doubt
and yet, the beautied power of such light
had placed its peace within me, and without

for there, above - redemption from afar -
the grace of heaven, shining … from a star.






Copyright © Gregory Richard Barden, December 25, 2022

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 1/23/2023 10:55:00 PM
Dear Gregory I rarely write poetry these days but I do ‘visit’ the site from time to time and it was wonderful to read your beautiful poems again. The emotion filling your missing Christmas tree poem was palpable and I’m so sorry that you’ve lost such a loved ‘companion’. This too was a joy to read. What a gift you have Gregory and thank you so much for sharing it with us. God bless. Wendy
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