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it was just … a look one … it was my reaction you saw - a recoil emotional … untethered it wilted, blue in louvered columns of moonlite long before it bloomed but you plucked it anyway one petal at a time a wish on each for my annihilation and doom … but my ruin was long ago your eyes whispering me a breeze through the cedars - gravity to a sparrow - first gaze and on I was done … now for sake of my fool’s song and a glance we’ll never know … what might’ve been. Copyright © Gregory Richard Barden, March 7, 2023

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Date: 3/8/2023 6:00:00 AM
Deeply into love and loving relationships and unrequited love and what might have been love. Says it all, as you usually do. Enjoyed reading your thoughts so well expressed.
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