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One Last Time

I pondered on how I could revive our love, wandered over the mountains, through the clouds above- I needed much more than you could ever give, a reason for completeness, had so much joy to give- I forgot how sensitive lost time could ever be, regretting all the moments of strange possibility- I was sanctified, as you lied, I wept, I cried- was I too blind to see? All the dismay in front of me… oh, you left, and I tried- tried to save our love one last time. A loss so great to endure in such madness, a cost paid so pure created in sadness- a panic of wisdom and a relief so deep, I didn’t want to hear you, for your secret, I did keep. Forgiveness reeks down my trembling spine, I was listening, you defied- oh, you left, and I tried- tried to save our love one last time. Free me and lose me, need me and choose me- toss me aside, a love so denied- oh, you left, and never tried- to save our love… one last time. August 1st, 2017

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Date: 8/5/2017 11:08:00 PM
Wonderfully-crafted poem, full of emotion and heart-wrenching melancholy - all my favorite things! This is exquisite, Laura - I so adore your writing, and a well-deserved win! Blessings and congrats! <3
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/5/2017 11:09:00 PM
I have to fav it!
Date: 8/5/2017 3:55:00 PM
Hi Laura, fantastic poem. I love this line, 'Forgiveness reeks down my trembling spine'.., memorable and the poem, tender heartbreak. Congrats on your placement!
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Date: 8/4/2017 2:37:00 PM
So lovely Luloo. Congratulations on your high placement! : )
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Date: 8/4/2017 1:43:00 PM
Really beautiful poem Laura... congratulations for the win.
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Date: 8/4/2017 12:20:00 PM
I thought this must be you Laura, the style and the internal rhyme, gets me every time, congrats on a fine placement, in a very difficult contest to judge!
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Date: 8/1/2017 3:19:00 PM
- A beautiful heartbreaking poem, Laura - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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