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Zest May Our Love Say

Darling, you are my gift, my treasured gold. I braved pain once that our joy might reach crest, So, now for said joy’s passion, answer bold amour's question born from my heart’s own chest: As love’s keen ache, will you crave me with zest? No words trite on this sentiment may lay. Just love words eloquent may our love say. Such happy promise dances to please us As Cupid’s quest quivers are aimed your way: Will my bliss know your shot of lust, kissed thus? Constance La France ''Z'' Contest, New Or Old - Poetry Contest January 15, 2017

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Jannie Breedt

Date: 1/23/2017 10:35:00 PM

CONGRATULATIONS Cay cay. A dizain indeed! You will have to teach me again. And then there was that last line ....It arrives home right between the eyes. I am so proud of you.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/21/2017 11:53:00 AM

Congrats on your first place!! Way to go..Sara

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 1/21/2017 11:28:00 AM

Oh how I love the dizain. Congratulations on your win.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/21/2017 8:08:00 AM

Congrats, CayCay!

Roy Pett

Date: 1/21/2017 1:53:00 AM

Congratulations CayCay, Inspirational piece of poetry, well deserved to be top poem.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/20/2017 7:49:00 PM

Caycay, take a BOW, lovely lady!! Top of the podium win! A lovely dizain from you. And the layout is so pretty! Congrats.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/20/2017 2:43:00 PM

So romantic Cay Cay, :) Hugs

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/18/2017 8:09:00 AM

This is a winner for me, CayCay:) a 7:) beautiful dizain on love:)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/17/2017 6:34:00 PM

Wow CayCay, impressive! I have never written or heard of this form. I hope it does great in the contest! I know you will have a beautiful Valentine's Day! 7 ; )

Judy Ball

Date: 1/15/2017 7:22:00 PM

Lovely Cay Cay. So soft and warm. There is great feeling in this. Loved it. God Bless, JB

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/15/2017 7:22:00 PM

Such a beautifully written Dizain, CayCay. Excellent meter, rhyme and sentiments. Best wishes for the contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 1/15/2017 6:03:00 PM

ADORE this one ... and I love this form. I am unfamiliar with the names of most forms, but hoping to learn. Love this form and mostly what you've done with it ... the lilt and metre. Keep up the great work!

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/15/2017 8:50:00 AM

Hi CayCay, You penned such a beautiful write. I found it to be romantic and honest. It reads like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. :-) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/15/2017 6:47:00 AM

- A beautiful poem CayCay - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)