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Miss Allegheny Mountain On her stone back the sleeping lady lies, while on upward ride to the Western skies, in blue lavender treeline's veiled disguise, Miss Allegheny Mountain grows in size. Azure cheeks are kissed by the dawn's sunrise. Toward morning stars point her tree lined thighs. Appearing on horizons in surprise, Miss Allegheny Mountain fills our eyes. On hilltops tall the mighty hawk abides, cross valleys green where daytime swiftly flies. In golden dress she bids the day that dies. Miss Allegheny Mountain gently sighs. Friends and love ones say hellos and goodbyes, Miss Allegheny twists in lows and highs, with sights so lovely one would truly prize, a pleasure journey of her mountainsides. 8/24/16

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Date: 1/29/2018 1:38:00 PM
Lovely piece Janis, like the imagery and the rhyme, very well done, blessings Gordon
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Date: 8/18/2017 3:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Janis, nicely done ~*
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Date: 8/17/2017 5:34:00 AM
I hope more will read this Janis. Can't believe it isn't higher on the list. Congratulations my friend! This is outstanding! : )
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Date: 8/17/2017 10:22:00 AM
Thanks Connie. I always appreciate your comments,
Date: 8/16/2017 9:03:00 PM
Oh, this is WONDERFUL! What an exquisite write, Janis, and a well-deserved win! This is going on my favs list - congrats! Love it! :-)
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Date: 8/17/2017 10:25:00 AM
Thanks so much for the fav, Greg. Blessings, Janis.
Date: 8/16/2017 7:50:00 AM
Congratulations Janis :)
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Date: 8/17/2017 10:22:00 AM
Thanks Heidi.
Date: 10/12/2016 4:18:00 PM
what wonderful personification and rhyme Janis:-) many congrats on your top spot:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/12/2016 7:23:00 PM
Thanks Jan........Bless you, Jan.
Date: 10/9/2016 11:11:00 PM
Outstanding in every way a poem can be. Congratulations for topping the chart with this lovely poem, Janis.
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Date: 10/10/2016 3:49:00 PM
Thanks Afzal. I really appreciate your comments. Blessings, Janis.
Date: 10/9/2016 6:24:00 PM
Beautiful, elegant descriptions and imagery in this gem Janis AND I have never read a poem that resembles this...A Monorhyme that could also be classified as a Kyrielle...Amazing! Congratulations - Tim
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Janis Thompson
Date: 10/9/2016 7:53:00 PM
Tim, now you have me curious as to a kyrielle. Something new for me. Thanks so much for your extensive comments. They were enlightening. Blessings,Janis
Date: 10/9/2016 3:26:00 PM
Outstanding, sensual imagery in difficult Monorhyme form, Janis! Congratulations on your well-deserved, First Place Trophy win! Hugs, Sandra
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Janis Thompson
Date: 10/9/2016 5:45:00 PM
Thanks, Sandra.
Date: 8/31/2016 7:42:00 AM
I enjoyed the imagery of your piece.... Congrats Janis, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 8/31/2016 4:25:00 PM
Thanks, Teddy. Good to hear from you.
Date: 8/30/2016 3:30:00 PM
Janis, beautiful lady!!!congrats on your placement! :)-luloo
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Date: 8/31/2016 4:25:00 PM
Thanks, luloo.
Date: 8/29/2016 7:30:00 PM
Hi Janis, Congratulations on your winning write: -) Alexis
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Date: 8/30/2016 11:10:00 AM
Thanks, Alexis Y
Date: 8/29/2016 4:27:00 PM
Great personification in this write, now after seeing the pictures I know what you mean!
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Date: 8/30/2016 11:11:00 AM
Thanks. Yes, they are beautiful.
Date: 8/29/2016 2:39:00 PM
Congrats, Janis. I like your personification of the mountains!
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Date: 8/30/2016 11:11:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by Agnes.
Date: 7/23/2016 10:03:00 PM
A creative write, Janis! Congrats on your placement! Blessings!
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Date: 7/24/2016 2:21:00 PM
Thanks, Kim
Date: 7/20/2016 11:39:00 AM
Lovely Congrats on your placement. :) Sunita
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Date: 7/20/2016 12:33:00 PM
Thanks, Sunita
Date: 7/19/2016 4:13:00 PM
Janis, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 7/19/2016 11:17:00 PM
Thanks....
Date: 7/13/2016 5:04:00 PM
wow, a sexy nature poem. Lady Mountain of the night!! I really like this.
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Janis Thompson
Date: 7/13/2016 8:30:00 PM
Thanks, ever seen the Alleghenys?....they are sleepy and smoky
Date: 7/13/2016 3:24:00 PM
Lovely monorhyme, Janis. Good luck with the competition. Barry.
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Date: 7/13/2016 8:32:00 PM
Thanks, Barry....love your image