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Hollow Man

Hollow man Hollow man, an empty vessel, lived life with vain abandon Selfishness and carnal lust were his constant companions Happiness was sought, indulging frantically in fleshly pleasures Pain was his only reward instead of priceless treasures. Chasing worthless endeavors, enticed by deluded aspirations Followed the leanings of his foolish heart, lead to altered expectations He gulped down licentiously, every drink that was in fashion Spent his life in wantonness and unbridled passions He spiraled down, seduced into debauchery's black hole and wonders to himself, why there is emptiness in his soul He seared his innocent conscience, rejected words heard so long ago Truth remains even though despised, you will reap what you sow Now, he sits, disillusioned and alone, staring into the cracked mirror His bleary eyes beginning to see, the truth ever clearer Still, he ponders if these consequences... are part of destiny's plan... it's hard to admit to himself, his own bad choices... created this... hollow man. April 10,2017

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Date: 6/20/2018 11:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Hit home.
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John Hamilton
Date: 6/21/2018 11:39:00 AM
Thanks Susan, was a nice surprise!
Date: 6/16/2018 7:52:00 PM
This is so fitting with the word "hollow". What could be more hollow than this scenario . Well done !! Congrats on your win!
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John Hamilton
Date: 6/16/2018 8:38:00 PM
Thanks Carrie!
Date: 6/16/2018 5:14:00 PM
Well penned, John. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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John Hamilton
Date: 6/16/2018 8:38:00 PM
Thanks Line!
Date: 6/16/2018 11:46:00 AM
John congratulations on your win in the contest with this excellent poem. Hope you are having a good day. Constance
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John Hamilton
Date: 6/16/2018 1:10:00 PM
Thanks Constance!
Date: 6/16/2018 10:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your awesome win, John. Hugs Eve ~' *
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John Hamilton
Date: 6/16/2018 1:09:00 PM
Thanks Eve!
Date: 6/16/2018 10:17:00 AM
Going down the hollow path..Congrats on your win
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John Hamilton
Date: 6/16/2018 1:09:00 PM
Thanks Joseph!
Date: 6/16/2018 9:41:00 AM
Beautifully penned my friend...a reflection that sometimes peaks its ugly stare...love & light to all reflections of hollowmen...^WW^
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John Hamilton
Date: 6/16/2018 1:09:00 PM
Thanks WW, was a nice surprise! I don't enter contests much anymore.
Date: 6/16/2018 7:47:00 AM
Congratulations for your win John :)
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John Hamilton
Date: 6/16/2018 1:08:00 PM
Thanks Heidi, was a nice surprise!
Date: 1/20/2018 10:46:00 PM
John, a captivating, expressive, thoughtful and thought provoking, poignant write. A very smooth rhythm and excellent rhymes tells the sad story beautifully. Warmest wishes ~Susan
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Susan Ashley
Date: 1/23/2018 3:44:00 PM
You're welcome John. Truly, the pleasure was all mine!
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John Hamilton
Date: 1/23/2018 12:46:00 PM
Thanks Susan, for visiting this older poem, now after reading it again, I'm going to touch up a few things, thanks for bringing me back!
Date: 6/23/2017 11:10:00 PM
OK, who said you could write my bio?!? Wow! This is incredible - and so pertinent to many of us, I think ... wish I could say this was me in my youth, but it took me much longer to realize what life was really about, and I had destroyed everything by then. This is hard-hitting and wonderfully-written, John, and so very honest. Love it - Fav!
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John Hamilton
Date: 6/24/2017 2:52:00 PM
Seems like many can relate to these words, too bad we use our youth to ruin our future, one 80 year old man told me I just figured out how to live, and now it's time to die, so sad. Thanks so much for the many visits today!
Date: 5/14/2017 5:50:00 PM
Great poem, John! It seems like you were writing about me in my youth. Such powerful truth. If any part of this searing poem is self-introspection, you've examined yourself well. Love the staccato style ending ... like truth bullets hitting the readers' heart blow by blow. Magnificent and classic poem. A 7 and a fave. Love and peace, brother.
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John Hamilton
Date: 5/14/2017 7:31:00 PM
Wow Freddie, thanks for the great comment and fave, sorry if it hit close to home, no not an introspection, just an observation about some people I know... really!!!
Date: 5/3/2017 10:18:00 AM
Great write John. Easily relatable.
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John Hamilton
Date: 5/3/2017 5:17:00 PM
Hope not too relatable lol! Thanks James
Date: 4/20/2017 4:32:00 AM
This hollow man, he sits in front of the mirror and realizes. And that is the first day of the rest of his life. Because he now has the chance to fill the vessel with beauty and importance. It is never too late. A very honest and moving portrait.
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John Hamilton
Date: 4/20/2017 12:17:00 PM
Thanks Darren, it's true it's never too late, but he still has to make amends, to move forward, acknowledging wrongs that hurt others, is the first step for sure!
Date: 4/18/2017 5:56:00 AM
Good Morning John. It was an honor turning to this entry. By the title I know it would be saying something but not to the magnitude once reading. This entry speaks to me. Bless the hollow man for he may have is reasons why choices were made that perhaps some may not understand including himself. You have expressed yourself and this entry with clarity and flow. Well done entirely including the title to which you never strayed. Enjoy the morning and day.
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John Hamilton
Date: 4/18/2017 9:15:00 AM
Thank you Lisa for your insightful comment, I'm glad that you enjoyed the depth of this poem. Yes we hope the hollow man can make amends to all he hurt, and then be blessed.
Date: 4/11/2017 2:36:00 PM
A reflective piece that is a tragic reality for far too many. I like how you take the reader through the phases of this man's life to becoming 'hollow' and stating it was his 'bad choices'. A terrific piece John with insight and sad truths. blessings xxx
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John Hamilton
Date: 4/11/2017 2:49:00 PM
Thanks Lynn I always enjoy your insightful comments,few today enjoy introspective pieces like this.
Date: 4/11/2017 12:24:00 AM
wow, this is very insightful about what makes a man this way, so shallow inside after years of bad habits. Very well done, John. A SEVEN (and thanks for my placement in your contest)
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John Hamilton
Date: 4/11/2017 2:50:00 PM
Thanks Andrea I appreciate the visit and comment.
Date: 4/10/2017 5:03:00 PM
Nicely crafted. The storyline in this is sad and lonely, but it is a result of his own doing. The rhymes in this were very smooth and unforced and the rhythm moved along at a pace perfect for the subject or theme. You have captured this dark scene really well.
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John Hamilton
Date: 4/10/2017 10:20:00 PM
Thanks Chris brave first comment, thanks a lot I know introspective pieces are not everyone's cup of tea but hey I don't like tea much anyway.

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