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quiver … of ALL - open, closed, one dimensional vibrating tendrils … larger scales appear as the particle norm antiphon?? charge, mass, gravitons hot-affecting quantum states of matter super-symmetry between bosons fermions … such weighty throb - chaotic fields connected influenced shaken … but still not clearly defined in all events - not channeled to unification but it MUST join somehow ... it's there, trembling like a horror - an electromagnetic phantom one of the weakest forces in all of the physical universe yet ... far beyond grasp our claws raking deep the flesh of wonder fiery glyphs raised but in excruciating futility … one day we'll laugh at its simplicity and that day ... God. will. weep. Copyright © Gregory Richard Barden, July 14, 2019; rewrite December 15, 2023

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Date: 12/31/2023 11:55:00 PM
Tears of frustration at our arrogant ignorance ? You keep the reader on their toes my friend.
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