Doppleganged

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because … you say I for me that is why my breath buoys your lungs why the dim depth of my eye measures yours reflected tentacular thoughts wrapping strangulating spattering what’s left like sea foam to sand to write its own stories - those are dreams they shape as they wish WHAT they wish taken or taken bliss … or disturbance leaving very little more than dreck yet … I am whole and as powerful as Prometheus because … you say I for me. Copyright © Gregory Richard Barden, March 14, 2023

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Daniel Turner

Date: 3/14/2023 9:08:00 AM

So eloquently rendered my friend. Long time no see Greg. You certainly haven't lost your touch. I love the reference to Prometheus. Mythology rocks! I hope life has been treating you kindly my old friend. A pleasure to read you again, Bard:)