Premiere Contest WinnerSkipping a Stone

I skip one stone across the pond,
an oblate onyx dotting i's
in footles of a vagabond
who tiptoes after tiger eyes.

Perhaps the ripples left behind
are teary runes of gray moonstone
by starry sapphires once declined
for poesies of chalcedone.

In unison do pines recite
around the swaying cellophane
with spruce in verses malachite
on tawny-needled counterpane.

Soon aloe waters recompose
an epilogue of silent prose.


11/5/17
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Roper Avatar
March 17, 2020 at 1:07 AM
Dale, congratulations on your awesome win with this beautiful verse. Hugs Eve
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
March 14, 2020 at 3:56 PM
A wealth of well-chosen words, Dale, a winning sonnet entertainingly done, worthy indeed for being 1st place, my thanks for your participation, Aloha, William
Cozart Avatar
March 14, 2020 at 7:05 PM
Thanks very much, William!
Gauthier Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 4:05 PM
Beautiful imagery, Dale. Congrats on your podium finish with this beauty.
Cozart Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 4:23 PM
Thanks so much for reading, Line.
Dietrich Avatar
January 28, 2018 at 12:04 AM
I appreciate you viewing some of my poems recently! I want to write and I just can't seem to motivate myself because there are so many contests I want to try. I don't even know where to start!!
Cozart Avatar
January 28, 2018 at 8:52 AM
I am right there with you. I'm having trouble getting started on two or three. I posted three poems in the past week or so that weren't for contests, but all took some planning. Maybe that's why.
Dietrich Avatar
January 28, 2018 at 12:03 AM
Noticing all the trophy wins you are racking up!! Here is one of them. It seems very familiar to me so I probably visited it before but I don't think I gave a congrats. Belated congrats for whichever contest this won so splendidly in. I am way behind in my comments, otherwise, I'd search out a poem of yours I have not seen yet. Let me know if there is a really good one of yours I just never caught yet! I bet there are lots (unless I have seen many of your poems already)
George   Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 10:34 AM
Congratulations on your win, Dale! Fabulous!. Elaine
Cozart Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 11:05 AM
Thanks, Elaine.
Pandit Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 3:54 PM
Congrats Dale..not many can match your your expert Sonnet poems..absolutely beautiful!
Cozart Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 4:11 PM
Thanks, Vijay!!
Scars Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 6:18 AM
Beautifully expressed...congrats!:)-luloo
Stebbings Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 3:34 AM
Congratulations, Dale, on your win with this lovely sonnet. // Barry
Ashley Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 8:11 PM
I remember well this enticing and rhythmic beauty, Dale. Congratulations for your great win! Warmest wishes ~Susan
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 4:24 PM
I love the way you have incorporated all of the lovely gemstones in this beautiful poem Dale! Congratulations on your well deserved second placement! I work with many of these gemstones for their healing properties. : )
Cozart Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 5:12 PM
Thank you, Connie, I always appreciate your comments and support.
Haight Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 3:55 PM
Great Sonnet, Dale! Congrats on your podium win! Sandra
Cozart Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 5:12 PM
Thanks so much, Sandra!
Hamilton Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 2:42 PM
An amazing vocab on this piece Dale, congrats on a fine win!
Cozart Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 2:45 PM
Thanks, John.
Medders Tobechi Avatar
November 28, 2017 at 6:00 PM
Lovely images deserving of first place. Congratulations.
Cozart Avatar
November 28, 2017 at 6:09 PM
Thanks so much, Janis!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 23, 2017 at 5:54 AM
Lovely in flow and words! Congrats on a much deserved win, Dale!
Cozart Avatar
November 23, 2017 at 7:44 AM
Thanks very much, Kim!
Cegalis Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 8:54 AM
I'm glad to read that I wasn't the only one to get out the dictionary. It is worth the effort. Congratulations for your wonderful poem!
Cozart Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 10:17 AM
Thanks, Cyndi!
Hamilton Avatar
November 21, 2017 at 10:08 AM
Congrats on a fine win Dale, your use of rarely used words makes the reader think and ponder on the great imagery used, I admit I had to get out the dictionary on this one, what an amazing vocabulary you have!
Cozart Avatar
November 21, 2017 at 10:11 AM
Thanks, John!
Dietrich Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 11:49 PM
I didn't make the cut as you said I would but at least This gem did. Congrats on the gold trophy Dale!
Cozart Avatar
November 21, 2017 at 8:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea!
Grasso Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 10:07 AM
Just lovely, Dale. Congratulations on the win! ...Fran
Cozart Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 10:10 AM
Thanks you, sir!
Gauthier Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 10:49 PM
Melodious - very charming poem. Congrats on your win, Dale.
Cozart Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 10:11 AM
Thanks, Line!
Haight Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 7:42 PM
Such a lovely Sonnet, Dale. Congratulations on your fine win. Sandra
Cozart Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 10:11 AM
Thanks so much, Sandra!
Barden Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 4:01 PM
Wow - two premiere wins in-a-row from Brian - nicely done and congrats, Dale - gorgeous write!
Cozart Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 4:17 PM
Thanks so much, Greg!
Andresen Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 3:00 PM
- Congratulations on a first class poem, wonderful written Dale - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cozart Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 3:02 PM
Thanks so much, Anne-Lise! I'm really excited about it!
Allison Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 9:28 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Dale unfortunately my stone sank without a trace lol:-) hugs jan xx
Cozart Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 8:20 AM
Thanks, Jan!
Krampe Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 8:07 AM
Coming back with congrats on your win.
Cozart Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 8:09 AM
Thanks so much, Agnes!
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