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Indian Pipe

INDIAN PIPE
(The Corpse Plant)


in the shadows
     in the shadows
          teardrop eyes

Like bagpipes they play, somber tunes of fear,
as doves do weep, as flamingoes bow down.
A ghost plant dirge, doth tremble dusty clouds.
The bells, they ring, intensely sing, slow-deep.

in the shadows
     in the shadows
          teardrop eyes

Like wax, their silhouettes a frozen mask.
A countenance, thus drained of chlorophyll.
The vampiric cold parasite craves night -
A leech, among the beech, with lovers scars.

in the shadows
     in the shadows
          teardrop eyes

A cold and clammy touch, doth turn a corpse
an inky black. A translucent pale ghost -
don’t touch, nor handle plant, nor creep too near
its eerie soil, nor step, upon its grave.

in the shadows
     in the shadows
          teardrop eyes

Original date : 5/11/2017

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Hamilton Avatar
July 15, 2017 at 3:14 PM
Beautiful imagery Kim, well done, and another congrats, you seem to be on a winning streak, that's what happens to such talented ones!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 7:20 AM
Thanks so much, John!
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July 15, 2017 at 10:07 AM
This is awesome, Kim. Congrats on your win.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 15, 2017 at 10:14 AM
Thanks so much, Dale!
Barden Avatar
July 15, 2017 at 6:58 AM
This was enchanting and mesmerizing, Kim, and it took me away to the ether in an instant ... that is a priceless quality of great composition and poetic style, and I adored this! Congratulations on SECOND PLACE and thank you for entering my contest! :-)
Rodrigues Avatar
July 15, 2017 at 7:06 AM
Greg, thank you for the wonderful comment! So excited to be chosen as the second place! <3 Kim
White Avatar
May 12, 2017 at 3:56 AM
I had never heard of such a plant, it's a scary one! Fav poem for me, so wonderfully written.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 12, 2017 at 6:54 AM
I know, right! Thanks, Darren!
Dietrich Avatar
May 11, 2017 at 7:36 PM
Excellent imagery with this one, Kim. Indian pipe, huh? I had never heard of this plant before!!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 11, 2017 at 7:39 PM
Thanks, Andrea!
Pinet Avatar
May 11, 2017 at 7:03 PM
You held my interest in this plant right to the end, with superb imagery and a easy, almost sing along flow. Your wit is as sharp as the proverbial tack. Emile.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 11, 2017 at 7:16 PM
Thanks so much, Emile!
Wood Avatar
May 11, 2017 at 4:35 PM
Once again, I had to look this plant up. I like how you have presented this and the imagery, ". . . their silhouettes a frozen mask." That is great stuff Kim. Well done! If I stick with you I may yet learn something I think!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 11, 2017 at 6:46 PM
Thanks, Dean :)
Green Avatar
May 11, 2017 at 4:21 PM
Wow, is there no limits to your poetic talent...wow again. I loved this Kim. I am familiar with this plant, I read about it in Smithsonian magazine and your poem is spot on.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 11, 2017 at 4:23 PM
Thanks, Chris! Scary crazy plant!
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