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Driftwood

fewer …

stars there are
in the heart of heaven
than the myriad ripples of brine that
gently placed me here -
tender tongues of tide that tossed me
and polished my bark away
shaped me smooth from jagged -
turned from beast, to beauty …
courses ago -
I was loosed from a tree
and lost to the sevens in a gale -
sundered from all I’d known
yet …
my journey was ordered
as all things are
made divine not by substance
but by ministration
and singularity …
for the universe, entire,
holds no other creation like me
the countless moments
and patient, boundless energy
that my trek required
would never have been wasted
on the unremarkable …
and though one sojourn has ended
something awaits
that is more infinite, even
than waves …
OR suns …

possibility.







Copyright © Gregory Richard Barden, August 12, 2023

( photo taken 8/1/23 by Gregory R Barden, Ferry Beach, Scarborough, ME )
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Lindley Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 4:47 AM
This my good friend, is so very deep, so very profound as to astound. Your poetic ink always awes us and you are indeed a master poet. A true gem and a very fine and deep fav for me. God bless you.
Cornish Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 4:31 AM
Your pen is Excalibur and you've drawn it from the stone!
Hamilton Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 12:49 PM
This is a great write G, loved the personification, you are a how do you say... singularity. How you write something so brilliant looking at a piece of driftwood, amazing.
Lawless Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 5:47 AM
A FAVE....A DOUBLE FAVE.....MAGNIFICENT!!! a subtle personification of the spirit
Barden Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 3:30 AM
Thank you so very kindly, John - much appreciated!
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