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you … sweetly spun me like sugar into cotton candy - from a dizzy bobbin to ornament for a spring willow … no lament avowed, for there is a demon in your eyes whose night blade feeds … he stalks me - spurious spear in his grasp not near as lethal as the shimmer that winks me from those depths, abyssal or the tender tendrils, oily black reaching from the unfathomable fathoms to sunder my forsaken heart and turn my marrow molten … melting … flesh burning for your arrow - welts of passion that thirst to weep crimson yet not even you can pierce that hermetic husk … hardened by casual care, another’s name, and the tear-tempered steel of your bewitching … gaze. Copyright © Gregory Richard Barden, January 6, 2024 ( painting by Bruno Barreira taken from public domain files at Saatchi Art )

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Date: 1/25/2024 11:36:00 AM
Lovely first 4 lines…brought my sewing machine out so loved the use of bobbin… yet not even you can pierce that hermetic husk
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/26/2024 9:51:00 AM
That’s very kind of you, Kim, thank you so much - so great to see a friendly “face” here, as I haven’t been around much the last couple of years, (taking care of my elderly folks). I hope you are well. Blessings! :o)

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