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aye … indeed ... dangle your dreamy toes, darlin' we sit the moon as whimsy - a shimmery sea of suns to tickle our feet while we nuzzle noses your hair is rainbow tinsel - eyes, a wild maelstrom of wonder twirling into those plum bows that glisten for a kiss … the gleaming gossamer tapestry spun with your smile to melt my mad midnight melancholy and drizzle upon the twilight it's whisper of the morn aye … indeed. (rewrite)

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Date: 12/31/2023 11:38:00 PM
Lovely ,lyrical .
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