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         Find me in the salt of your drifting tears,
    deep chameleon waters of time lost-
              Deluging and immersing in soaked fears,
       while the ebb and flow of life pays the cost.
               Second by second your timepiece appears-
                        Oh, count the years…
                                            ...may the current find me.



January 17, 2017

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Date: 6/3/2017 3:29:00 AM
Oh, I adore this Luloo ... such exquisite phrasing and substantive meaning ... I'm favorite-ing this one. Congrats! :-)
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Date: 6/2/2017 10:18:00 PM
Back for congrats!
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Date: 6/2/2017 1:11:00 PM
Congrats Laura
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Date: 6/2/2017 8:05:00 AM
Lovely, Luloo! Congrats!
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Date: 1/26/2017 7:17:00 AM
Rich, beautiful imagery!!! Congrats Laura, for your WIN with this piece!!! ;-)
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Date: 1/22/2017 12:51:00 PM
superb win for a superb poem, Laura. Congratulations.
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Date: 1/22/2017 1:23:00 PM
thank you lovely Andrea :)-luloo
Date: 1/22/2017 8:47:00 AM
Congrats!!! LL...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 1/22/2017 1:23:00 PM
thank you WW! :)-luloo
Date: 1/22/2017 2:02:00 AM
Congrats!
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Date: 1/22/2017 1:23:00 PM
thank you sweet Sushma :)-luloo
Date: 1/22/2017 12:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win my dear friend, Laura! Hugs and cheers! Thanks also for the acknowledgement of my poem in your contest. More blessings!
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Date: 1/22/2017 1:23:00 PM
thank you Galeo :)-luloo
Date: 1/21/2017 11:31:00 PM
I really like 'deep chameleon waters of time lost'. Congrats Laura.
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Date: 1/22/2017 1:22:00 PM
thank you Rob :)-luloo
Date: 1/21/2017 9:16:00 PM
congratulations on your win girl Hugs
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Date: 1/22/2017 1:22:00 PM
thank you sweet Eve :)-luloo
Date: 1/21/2017 3:21:00 PM
This is one of the very best that I've read, Laura; you made every line count! Congratulations on this lovely podium finish:) Regards // paul
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Date: 1/22/2017 1:22:00 PM
thank you Paul :)-luloo
Date: 1/21/2017 2:24:00 PM
Congrats on a great win Laura
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Date: 1/22/2017 1:22:00 PM
thank you Joseph! :)-luloo
Date: 1/21/2017 1:52:00 PM
i got immersed in the haunting mood of your melody, laura... cheers for the high win and thanks for joining.. huggs
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Date: 1/22/2017 1:21:00 PM
oh thank you sweet Nette! I am honored :) -luloo
Date: 1/18/2017 8:05:00 AM
This one is a winner for sure, Laura:) deserves more than a 7:)
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Date: 1/18/2017 9:06:00 AM
awww thank you lovely Jo :)-luloo
Date: 1/18/2017 6:47:00 AM
Beautifully penned Laura..
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Date: 1/18/2017 9:06:00 AM
thank you Joseph :) -luloo
Date: 1/17/2017 9:25:00 PM
I think nette will love this one. It's very nicely written with all that imagery. Thanks for my win in your contest too, Laura Loo
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Date: 1/18/2017 9:06:00 AM
thank you! :)-luloo- and you're welcome :)