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Corridors of Uncertainty

raised ink blots of braille - a feeble language to me. licking fingers to flip page. knowledge found in books - heavy in “rest in peace” pile. how will i impart knowledge? uncertain compass - borrowed from Captain Sparrow. how can i find my true North? intemperate spin, rotating all directions. the waves of the sea engulf. sunlight filter in. Lord light the ancient pathway - one that leads to happiness. should growing older stunt progress forward? march on, have courage, i tell myself. 11/10/2017 Empty Your Soul With Words Sponsor: Broken Wings

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Date: 12/9/2017 3:51:00 PM
Oh, I just love this, Kim - the unusual structure, the metaphor and imagery, and the lesson ... have to fave this! Congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend - blessings!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/9/2017 4:46:00 PM
Thanks so much, Greg! <3
Date: 11/26/2017 7:27:00 AM
Kim, I like your style and congratulations on your win in my contest !
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/26/2017 1:15:00 PM
Thank you, Constance <3 Kim
Date: 11/26/2017 1:50:00 AM
Well done, Kim, love it. I like the strong ending- a lesson for us all. Congrats! Viv x
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/26/2017 5:38:00 AM
Thank you, sweet Viv!
Date: 11/25/2017 1:59:00 PM
You pulled this form off amazingly well for this contest, congratulations
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/25/2017 3:32:00 PM
Thank you, Brian!
Date: 11/25/2017 8:51:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/25/2017 3:32:00 PM
Thank you, Joe!

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