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bam … the thought explodes - a tritium fusion reaction of epiphany engulfing my every concern knocking me on my bloated ego … I have swum your gaze a hundred hundred times and more … I have drowned in those depths with no thought to the danger and no sate to my thirst … it has been my refuge and my prison - a warming blanket, and a frigid reality it has revealed to me mysteries, unequaled and a brume of toroidal chaos my joys, my sorrows, my all … my nothing … passions and pains and pardons purgatory … and heaven have all saturated me in the emerald abyss that is your eyes yet … until this very moment the diabolical truth of that enigmatic expanse has eluded me … it is not the unknowns that swirl there it is not the beauty or the ire it is not the acumen or ardor or equity it is not the anger or the grace of your gaze that so troubles me now and seeks to destroy my very being … it is the glaring, ghastly realization that the horrid blackness I find there is nothing less … than ME - I am your darkness … and that is the ONE thing I can not be … bam. Copyright © Gregory Richard Barden, January 2, 2024

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