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Landscape - Beach Scene

How I love the sky, the sea and land. Today I paint myself into a scene of visual delight; though I'm on sand, I dip my brush first into vivid green. Tall trees are in my view far left and right. I paint the path made out of stones that led me to this beach which now is my escape! I paint the sand, then dip into some red! I'm all alone in my red bikini. I like the fact that it’s in contrast to the white of sand and forest’s verdancy. But, oh, the backdrop is amazing blue! My picture’s top half is the sea. Beyond its tranquil surface, now my eyes are drawn to hues of brightness of which I am fond as twilight’s sky I am adding on. Some tangerine with crimson I have swirled onto the canvas, and the red’s the same as my bikini! Finally, this world I've been painting I inscribe with my name! 10/21/17

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Date: 10/7/2017 12:32:00 AM
Gorgeous write, Andrea - love it! Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend - wonderful work! :-)
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Date: 10/6/2017 7:13:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest with this awesome write !
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Date: 10/6/2017 1:00:00 AM
Congrats Andrea, lovely imagery :)
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Date: 7/28/2017 10:25:00 PM
Beautiful picture.
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Date: 7/8/2017 10:22:00 PM
Congrats on the contest, Andrea. This is great!
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Date: 7/8/2017 7:16:00 AM
Congrats on the POTD Andrea. I think the sea and sand is a constant temptation for us inland bodies, as other side of the river always beckons...:)
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Date: 7/1/2017 11:37:00 PM
Congrats on your placement in the contest, Andrea. :) Carole
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Date: 6/30/2017 9:08:00 PM
I see some Burnt Umber and Sienna on one horizon, and Payne's Gray in the sky on the other! This is wonderful, Andrea ... so exquisitely described and the things it paints in my mind are all joyous and sublime ... I love it - a fav for sure! Congrats - much-deserved, my friend! :-) <3
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Date: 6/30/2017 6:11:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on POTD Andrea! So deserving! : )
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Date: 6/30/2017 2:12:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win ~*
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Date: 6/29/2017 11:01:00 PM
A great picture you have painted for us wonderful job :)
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Date: 6/29/2017 8:03:00 PM
Andrea, that red bikini is the star of your landscape! Lovely! Congrats on your win in my contest!
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Date: 6/26/2017 3:38:00 AM
- Congratulations with your p.o.t.d., Andrea :) - Well deserved :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/26/2017 12:28:00 AM
loved reading it
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Date: 6/26/2017 12:14:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea on POTD. Where's the bikini photos? Great imagery in your word painting:)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/26/2017 9:49:00 PM
I'll show you, if you give up smoking!!
Date: 6/25/2017 9:30:00 PM
Andrea wjen the POTD comes in my email the poems don't have a name, but I just knew this was yours. Congratulations on having it honored as POTD! Love the twilight skies. A lovely scene you paint! I watched the sunset yesterday and took pictures of the pink clouds. : )
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Date: 6/25/2017 3:56:00 PM
Wow! You've painted a beautiful scene :) This is so much needed on these rainy days ;) Congratulations on the POTD!
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Date: 6/25/2017 3:14:00 PM
what a fabulous quatrain Andrea and many congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/25/2017 2:46:00 PM
Very painterly, Andrea. I hope you have put this into the 'Landscapes' contest. // Barry.
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Date: 6/25/2017 12:33:00 PM
Wow! Andrea this is absolutely beautiful! I love it :)
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Date: 6/25/2017 9:18:00 AM
I never had any doubts that you were a great wordsmith, Andrea, but now you confirm my suspicion that you are also a talented painter:) Regards // paul
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/26/2017 9:50:00 PM
in my dreams. haha You should see me try to illustrate with pictures in the classroom. OMG, a first grader could draw a better stick figure!
Date: 6/25/2017 7:37:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant quatrain Andrea, you have certainly painted a beautiful picture with your words, so talented. :)
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Date: 6/25/2017 6:05:00 AM
This is so so beautiful Andrea...What a lovely imagery!Amazing flow,I loved it... Really fantastic... Good luck with the contest...
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Date: 6/25/2017 5:37:00 AM
Wow, you have painted a beautiful painting with so many lovely colors...er'rr poem. Lol...I know it's for Kim's contest. GL!
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Date: 6/25/2017 4:29:00 AM
Lovely flow of imagery, Andrea!! "Verdancy" is a cool word (have heard / used "Verdant" before, but interesting to see that variation. Best of luck with the contest. Regards, John.
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