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Morning Cues

       
    A dapper morning awaits
         as I gaze out
        to an awakening
       steeped in conviviality
         so palpable in glow of
            leaves bathed anew
              radiant in glory
             Glistening crisp
              blades of grass
         razor edged sharp
           deftly cut through
            weeds of gloom
      Aromas soaked in mirth
         envelope landscape
               From my soul
             infused with joy
             escapes a sigh
             embraced avidly
           by bountiful breeze
the lines between us blur slowly
         as it subsumes me
        And I cease to be
          my spirit merged
              with universe...

Date July 10 2017
July Premier contest any form any theme sponsored by Brian Strand

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Date: 10/25/2017 12:56:00 PM
Fantastic poem. Wonderful imagery. It has great rhythm and flow. Enjoyed it immensely.
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 3/4/2018 3:08:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 8/14/2017 3:53:00 AM
- A wonderful poem, Sushma :) - I see it is a winning poem ... CONGRATULATIONS, well deserved ! - happy hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 8/14/2017 4:22:00 AM
Thanks a lot for your warm appreciation!
Date: 8/10/2017 4:24:00 PM
Hi Sushma: I was overwhelmed by some of your overwhelming imagery and words. Brian should be ashamed if he doesn't give you a placement. Great Write!
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 8/10/2017 9:05:00 PM
Thank you! This poem was placed second in the contest.
Date: 7/21/2017 1:55:00 AM
Congratulation. Aromas linger in the poem although these are washed away by the monsoon rains.
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 8/10/2017 9:05:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 7/17/2017 4:08:00 PM
this is filled with beautiful and imaginative images, Sushma. I hope brian loves it!
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 7/18/2017 6:52:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 7/13/2017 7:51:00 PM
This is wonderful, Sushma ... whimsical and woven with imagination and creativity. Fav-ing this one ... congrats on the win!
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 7/13/2017 8:20:00 PM
Thank you and Congrats to you too!
Date: 7/13/2017 7:41:00 AM
You paint a beautiful image; it was a pleasure to read your poem this morning. Congrats on your win.
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 7/13/2017 7:57:00 AM
Thank you Agnes! We have very few such mornings here but luckily past few days it has been drizzling incessantly so it is great weather. Otherwise North Indian plains are more like your July poem during summer months :) Congrats to you too!
Date: 7/10/2017 11:01:00 AM
This is very beautifully written. I love the picture you painted with your words. I look forward to reading more of your poetry.
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 7/10/2017 11:37:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words :)