The Pearl

The moon was a pearl - a large white brilliant pearl of a moon precious like the one I adored as it shone down on us from the sky. The sky was a sea - a broad expanse of midnight blue as deep as the love we made deep in a night swimming with shimmering myriads of stars. And the stars were fish - beautiful shimmering star-fish as bright as the glow in his eyes - those eyes that gazed into mine deep into the night of the beautiful sky - that broad expanse of midnight blue - the sea into which we gazed so deeply in love as the moon met our gaze - the moon that shone down on me and my love most precious - Oh, night of the large, white brilliant moon - the pearl. 3/11/13 For Mark Toney's '2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 12' Poetry Contest
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Kauffman Avatar
August 29, 2022 at 9:54 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrea! I just floated through your romantic layers of images and alliteration! So beautiful! Blessings.
Ashley Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 5:56 PM
Dear Andrea, it was such a joy to return to read this romantic gem once again. So beautiful! Congratulations for your excellent win in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
George Avatar
August 26, 2022 at 9:03 PM
Beautiful Andrea..... ! Congratulations on your great win in the Marathon contest!
Watt Avatar
August 26, 2022 at 9:02 AM
Glad to see you garner a win with this "gem". Really liveky to read it again. Congrats ~ John
Toney Avatar
August 26, 2022 at 9:02 AM
What beautiful poetry, Andrea! "The moon was a pearl"... "The sky was a sea"... "And the stars were fish". You shared your precious, imaginative upside-down moment with us and ignited our memories of years gone by. A Fav poem for me. Congratulations on your win on Mile 12 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 13 has already started!
Dietrich Avatar
August 26, 2022 at 9:14 PM
thank you so very much. This one is such a special poem to me.
La France Avatar
August 26, 2022 at 7:56 AM
Andrea, beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in the contest ~
Watt Avatar
February 8, 2020 at 9:04 PM
You have a gift for seeing the same nature that the rest of us see, but with new poetic eyes. Here the sky is turned upside down and contains the elements of a great sea. Such an amorous write as well. Beautiful.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 3, 2017 at 6:55 PM
Back for congrats!
Lane Avatar
August 3, 2017 at 5:47 PM
This one has brought you to a winner's list again. Well done!
Ashley Avatar
August 3, 2017 at 5:35 PM
Hi Andrea, how passionate and beautiful this poem is! A fav for me. Congratulations :)
Krampe Avatar
August 3, 2017 at 3:25 PM
Coming back with congrats - glad to see this one again.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 14, 2017 at 9:21 PM
Stunning, dreamlike, love it! Congrats, Andrea!
Singh Avatar
July 14, 2017 at 9:25 AM
Congrats on your fine win, Andrea! Sweetly worded!
Lawless Avatar
July 14, 2017 at 8:22 AM
a lusty romp into the metaphoric depths of love.....congrats Andrea....
Barden Avatar
July 13, 2017 at 8:01 PM
This is fantastic, Andrea - I adore it! I wrote a poem a while ago (To Sail the Sky) which had a similar theme - turning the sky and sea upside-down. When I was little my mom and I would lie on the floor, legs up in a chair to relax, heads tilted back, and imagined we were living in the house upside-down, stepping over the doorways, etc., so I've always viewed the world in "odd" ways, lol. This is just perfect, in my opinion - have to fav! (I'm spending a day on your page sometime soon!). :-)
Krampe Avatar
July 13, 2017 at 8:03 AM
Wow, this is stunning. I love how all your images weave together into one painting.
Hamilton Avatar
July 13, 2017 at 6:16 AM
This was a pleasure to read, I never read your older poems, thanks for posting this oldie but goodie, congrats on another win!
Omara Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 8:15 PM
A beautiful poem full of wonderful imagery. - Red
Komala Avatar
March 31, 2013 at 8:13 AM
hi sweetest Andrea.. just dropping by to wish you a very Happy Easter <3 and i found this piece so amazing.. enjoyed so much <3 much love and lights <3 Sk
Babcock Avatar
March 27, 2013 at 9:42 PM
Nicely done on this wonderful poem. Romance and spring is in the air. love phyl
A  Avatar
March 27, 2013 at 4:57 PM
Andrea, this is lovely. congrats on the winning poem~SKAT
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 23, 2013 at 4:21 AM
Many Congrats Andy love and many hugs xx
Gildersleeve Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 6:40 PM
Andrea congratulation on your win. I love the imagery and the metaphor. Warm Smiles, Connie
Harper Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 5:49 PM
Lovely night of pearl's Andrea, congratulations on your win.
A   Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 4:32 PM
Hi Andrea, a nice winning poem... many congrats :-).... always & forever* PD
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