From Sunset To Sunrise

FROM SUNSET TO SUNRISE Her clinging mermaid-figure, auburn hair - french braid-chaste. Pearl’s arms circumnavigate his nautical-neck. Strong arms gird her waist. His hands, like the current, draw her in. She inhales with fingers laced. Like the sublime shoreline, their outlines traced. Water and sand swirl around their feet, hearkening to the flautist-tide. Pearl’s arms circumnavigate his nautical-neck. Strong arms gird her waist. The sky, stars, and moon vanish - in a lover’s cove, they hide. Recognized with a full-moon revelation - no disguise, She is likely to drown in the whirlpool of his eyes. With the whispers of his high-tide love, she does rise, Answering in kind - breathing in and out her replies, As their lifetime stretches from sunset to sunrise. The aquamarine of Pearl’s eyes match her swimming gown. She is likely to drown in the whirlpool of his eyes, Snatched by the undercurrent, of her lover’s seaweed crown. The shrieking seagull o’erhead, her memory recalls. The darkened lighthouse, stronghold sinking, falls. Feet weeping on serrated shells, his footprints lost in sandy halls. His sea-drenched bodysuit, her frightened squalls. Inlet eyes, stained red, revere venomous jellyfish - tentacled balls. A shallow survivor - her lover’s footprints she could not save. The darkened lighthouse, stronghold sinking, falls. She dives into the cold abyss of a mourner’s grave. Pearl will find her eternal love, beyond the sun’s rays. 11/2/2017 Laura Loo’s Rhyme Time II Contest

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Date: 11/29/2017 3:21:00 PM
Kim I like your poem. It has a sad ending.I am pleased that you won. Have a niceevening my friend.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/30/2017 5:37:00 AM
Thank so much, Darlene!
Date: 11/26/2017 7:49:00 AM
Such a well-written poem, Kim. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/26/2017 1:16:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra! Hugs back at ya xx
Date: 11/25/2017 8:22:00 AM
wow what great imagery! awesome rhythm and rhyme too :) thank you and congrats on top placement :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/25/2017 3:40:00 PM
Thank you, Luloo!
Date: 11/24/2017 8:25:00 PM
Kim, congratulations on your win with this beautifully written poem. Excellent!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/24/2017 9:14:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve! <3
Date: 11/23/2017 12:01:00 AM
Congratulations, Kim on your win. What flowing and elaborate description you've weaved.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/23/2017 5:48:00 AM
Thank you, Subimal!
Date: 11/22/2017 5:28:00 PM
such awesome imagery Kim :-) many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/22/2017 9:12:00 PM
Thank you, Jan! <3
Date: 11/22/2017 4:33:00 PM
Oh, the picture this paints in my head - I would love to see this published and a great Fantasy artist take this on ... a whole book could be written from this charming and whimsical start - love it! Blessings and congrats on your win, Kim, I think this would have been my sole number one, and I am fav-ing it for sure. Blessings, Friend! :-) <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/22/2017 9:11:00 PM
Thanks so very much, Greg!! <3
Date: 11/3/2017 8:17:00 AM
An explosion of magnificent language expressions that embellishes your divine poem dearest, Kim! Marvelous work!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/3/2017 8:49:00 AM
Thanks so much, Demetrios! I love your florid images, paired with marvelous monokus!!! <3 Kim
Date: 11/3/2017 8:07:00 AM
a full-moon revelation, with spellbinding maritime imageries.A best one for me, Kim.Love.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/3/2017 8:48:00 AM
Thanks so much, Rajat! <3
Date: 11/3/2017 7:02:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this poem--the repeat lines add to the beauty--very well done, Kim--best for a win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/3/2017 7:40:00 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay! Blessings, my friend!
Date: 11/2/2017 10:04:00 PM
Wow Kim, what a masterpiece. A winner in my eyes already -not that you need it but good luck in the contest...Maria xxx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/2/2017 10:56:00 PM
Thanks so much, Maria! :)
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