From Sunset To Sunrise

FROM SUNSET TO SUNRISE Her clinging mermaid-figure, auburn hair - french braid-chaste. Pearl’s arms circumnavigate his nautical-neck. Strong arms gird her waist. His hands, like the current, draw her in. She inhales with fingers laced. Like the sublime shoreline, their outlines traced. Water and sand swirl around their feet, hearkening to the flautist-tide. Pearl’s arms circumnavigate his nautical-neck. Strong arms gird her waist. The sky, stars, and moon vanish - in a lover’s cove, they hide. Recognized with a full-moon revelation - no disguise, She is likely to drown in the whirlpool of his eyes. With the whispers of his high-tide love, she does rise, Answering in kind - breathing in and out her replies, As their lifetime stretches from sunset to sunrise. The aquamarine of Pearl’s eyes match her swimming gown. She is likely to drown in the whirlpool of his eyes, Snatched by the undercurrent, of her lover’s seaweed crown. The shrieking seagull o’erhead, her memory recalls. The darkened lighthouse, stronghold sinking, falls. Feet weeping on serrated shells, his footprints lost in sandy halls. His sea-drenched bodysuit, her frightened squalls. Inlet eyes, stained red, revere venomous jellyfish - tentacled balls. A shallow survivor - her lover’s footprints she could not save. The darkened lighthouse, stronghold sinking, falls. She dives into the cold abyss of a mourner’s grave. Pearl will find her eternal love, beyond the sun’s rays. 11/2/2017 Laura Loo’s Rhyme Time II Contest
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De Beaulieu Avatar
November 29, 2017 at 3:21 PM
Kim I like your poem. It has a sad ending.I am pleased that you won. Have a niceevening my friend.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 30, 2017 at 5:37 AM
Thank so much, Darlene!
Haight Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 7:49 AM
Such a well-written poem, Kim. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Rodrigues Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 1:16 PM
Thank you, Sandra! Hugs back at ya xx
Scars Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 8:22 AM
wow what great imagery! awesome rhythm and rhyme too :) thank you and congrats on top placement :)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 3:40 PM
Thank you, Luloo!
Roper Avatar
November 24, 2017 at 8:25 PM
Kim, congratulations on your win with this beautifully written poem. Excellent!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 24, 2017 at 9:14 PM
Thank you so much, Eve! <3
Sinha-Roy Avatar
November 23, 2017 at 12:01 AM
Congratulations, Kim on your win. What flowing and elaborate description you've weaved.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 23, 2017 at 5:48 AM
Thank you, Subimal!
Allison Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 5:28 PM
such awesome imagery Kim :-) many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 9:12 PM
Thank you, Jan! <3
Barden Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 4:33 PM
Oh, the picture this paints in my head - I would love to see this published and a great Fantasy artist take this on ... a whole book could be written from this charming and whimsical start - love it! Blessings and congrats on your win, Kim, I think this would have been my sole number one, and I am fav-ing it for sure. Blessings, Friend! :-) <3
Rodrigues Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 9:11 PM
Thanks so very much, Greg!! <3
Trifiatis Avatar
November 3, 2017 at 8:17 AM
An explosion of magnificent language expressions that embellishes your divine poem dearest, Kim! Marvelous work!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 3, 2017 at 8:49 AM
Thanks so much, Demetrios! I love your florid images, paired with marvelous monokus!!! <3 Kim
Chakrabarty Avatar
November 3, 2017 at 8:07 AM
a full-moon revelation, with spellbinding maritime imageries.A best one for me, Kim.Love.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 3, 2017 at 8:48 AM
Thanks so much, Rajat! <3
Pandit Avatar
November 3, 2017 at 7:02 AM
I enjoyed reading this poem--the repeat lines add to the beauty--very well done, Kim--best for a win!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 3, 2017 at 7:40 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay! Blessings, my friend!
Williams Avatar
November 2, 2017 at 10:04 PM
Wow Kim, what a masterpiece. A winner in my eyes already -not that you need it but good luck in the contest...Maria xxx
Rodrigues Avatar
November 2, 2017 at 10:56 PM
Thanks so much, Maria! :)
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