Surely, I Shall

surely, I shall recall my death as well as I fail to remember my birth
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Gauthier Avatar
November 10, 2022 at 3:45 PM
Well penned, CayCay ~
Alex Avatar
April 10, 2022 at 7:16 AM
Wow! Great one! Congratulations!
Daniel Avatar
April 10, 2022 at 1:47 AM
Very deep, CayCay, congratulations, hope you are doing well:)
Goldsmith Avatar
April 9, 2022 at 3:36 PM
Congratulations on this win. Few words with much said. A very creative write. Today, be blessed with your win....................
Dietrich Avatar
April 9, 2022 at 8:30 AM
and big congrats for making Line's short list.
Dietrich Avatar
April 9, 2022 at 8:30 AM
wow, deep one. but where ARE you, Caycay?? I wrote a limerick about you for one of the contests. I hope you find it!!
Ashley Avatar
December 5, 2017 at 6:00 PM
CayCay, the depths from which your intellect, soul and words flow runs magnificently deep and clear my very talented friend. A glistening gem. It's no wonder your poem placed in the contest - congratulations.. Warmest wishes.
Thirtyseven Avatar
May 4, 2017 at 9:39 AM
Its been a slow journey but I'm still tweet linking poetry lists from the winners of my contest. Thanks so much for entering, and congrats on your placement. Cheers Scott
Allison Avatar
April 16, 2017 at 12:56 PM
Fab one liner Cay Cay many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Ficklin Avatar
April 16, 2017 at 8:58 AM
My personal favorite! :) congrats
Barden Avatar
April 15, 2017 at 7:46 PM
I LOVE this Caycay - this is a winner in my opinion, my fav and a 7+! Wonderfully penned. :-)
Dietrich Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 7:50 PM
Caycay, this is BRILLIANT, Lady. Wow, and congrats. For me it would have been a first place.
White Avatar
October 15, 2016 at 1:23 PM
This is absolutely gorgeous CayCay. One line, but a favourite.
Trifiatis Avatar
October 15, 2016 at 2:41 AM
Each time the soul crosses the river of oblivion obliged is to drink from the water of forgetfulness for that is the law of eternal recurrence dearest, CaCay! Excellent!
Onclaud Avatar
October 15, 2016 at 2:03 AM
lovely memoir from you, dear cay!.. my big congrats to you, kindred soul..huggs
Smith Avatar
October 14, 2016 at 8:33 PM
One can only hope to remember, congratulations CayCay...
Turner Avatar
October 14, 2016 at 8:10 PM
I can't believe I did not comment when I read this the first time. I think this damn website eats some comments. It is a great one liner and congratulations on your placement, CayCay.
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 14, 2016 at 7:23 PM
What a great one-liner CayCay! Gives us a lot to ponder. 7 ; )
Haight Avatar
October 14, 2016 at 6:31 PM
Words of wisdom, CayCay. Congratulations on your placement. Hugs, Sandra
Rycroft Avatar
October 14, 2016 at 4:01 PM
I remember been born, I spoke To God I told him I want to be born a boy, he said no you have to be born a girl, then I was born. Your words are good x
P  Avatar
October 14, 2016 at 9:36 AM
Oh wow, this is a good one CayCay...there are people that say they recall their birth, sounds so odd to me. I don't get that at all.
Gupta Avatar
October 14, 2016 at 5:35 AM
Very well said ... nice one liner ...
Chircop Avatar
October 14, 2016 at 1:46 AM
Excellent one liner...: )
Andresen Avatar
October 14, 2016 at 1:18 AM
- A great one, CayCay - GL in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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