Akkina Downing Poet Free verse

A Night of Passion

It wasn't love they needed
It was a night of passion they yearned for
       One feverish touch 
       One delicious kiss
and it was a blaze of flame 
they could not resist 

She was in a high fever to touch and feel all of him 
He was on fire ready to explode needing her ever most

They need not the light on 
They just need each other 
         In the dark
         In the bed
There they explore undisturbed
There they found pure satisfactions
     She lay shamelessly smiling 
     He, holding on to her happily
  
        Smile 
Akkina R Downing 
      7-12-17

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Paul Callus March 24, 2018 at 5:58 PM I don't know how I missed this one, Akkina! It's lovely, romantic and passionate to say the least. I see you were awarded POTD for it, so...Congratulations:) Smiles & Hugs // paul

Freddie Robinson Jr. November 22, 2017 at 3:30 PM Yeah, I feel the vibe of this poem for real, Akkina. Passion of fire always warms the soul, and two always draw more heat ... much like this sensual poem. Caliente fiery write. A sparkling gold Romantico poem. Love and joy always. Akkina Downing November 24, 2017 at 9:56 PM Many many thanks my dear friend... hugs and smiles and loves always :)

Andrea Dietrich November 22, 2017 at 1:06 PM ooh la la. Your SECOND best poem is sizzling!! Akkina Downing November 22, 2017 at 1:55 PM Thanks Drea :) hugs and smiles :)

Cebo Soul August 20, 2017 at 2:03 PM well written,I loved it. Akkina Downing August 20, 2017 at 5:51 PM Thank you Cebo! :)

Kudzai Mhangwa August 3, 2017 at 12:57 PM Nice piece here Akkina! Akkina Downing August 4, 2017 at 12:16 PM Thank you Kudzai :)

Mike Reed August 2, 2017 at 4:29 AM I think we just Might Workout after all! Sweet, sweet Akkina! Wow! Akkina Downing August 4, 2017 at 12:17 PM Lol! Thank you Mike :)

Ram R. V. July 29, 2017 at 5:40 AM Genuine passion! Good read. well done, Akkina! Ram Akkina Downing July 29, 2017 at 12:52 PM Thank you so kindly Ram :)

Robert Lindley July 26, 2017 at 8:39 AM Here you clearly capture the intense heat and great need oft two overs share. Such experiences are treasures in life , for when love is that strong--its a rare gift. A fav.. Akkina Downing July 26, 2017 at 10:06 AM Thank you so much Rob, I'm always happy to hear from you. Your visit and comment means a lot to me. Hugs :)

Susan Ashley July 23, 2017 at 8:52 PM Ohh lala.., what a hot passionate night! Very beautifully done Akkina! Congrats on POTD:) Akkina Downing July 23, 2017 at 9:07 PM Hahaha ;) it was a fun write, and thank you so much :)

James Swartz July 18, 2017 at 5:35 PM Great sensual feelings this produces in my mind. Very nice words to make us remember love. Akkina Downing July 18, 2017 at 8:19 PM Thank you James :)

Pashang Salehi July 18, 2017 at 11:42 AM “Be the flame, not the moth.” Akkina Downing July 18, 2017 at 12:27 PM Haha... hello Pashang, thanks for the visit and comment :)

Keith O.J. Hunt July 17, 2017 at 12:08 PM Wow! Steamy hot love in the dark.... Congrats on POTD Akkina; a very nice change for a good read:-) Akkina Downing July 17, 2017 at 12:17 PM ;) thank you Keith!

Eileen Manassian July 17, 2017 at 5:29 AM Sizzle Sizzle...Lovely write, dear. I see that it got the POTD trophy! :) Great. Love a woman who can write about passion fearlessly. Hugs Akkina Downing July 17, 2017 at 8:16 AM Hello Miss Eileen, thank you for stopping by. I'm just having fun here on our play ground ;) big hugs and enjoy your week dear :)

Anne-Lise Andresen July 17, 2017 at 3:01 AM - Sorry a little bit ... this beautiful poem deserved one p.o.t.d., congratulations Akkina :) - I have not been so much on " the soup" in recent weeks - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :) Akkina Downing July 17, 2017 at 8:11 AM Awe, thank you Anne-Lise and I hope all is well. Have a great week dear...big hug :)

Ravi Sathasivam July 17, 2017 at 1:41 AM Excellent. Very romantic write. Congrats on the POTD Akkina. Thanks for sharing it. Akkina Downing July 17, 2017 at 8:06 AM Thank you so much Ravi, always made smile from your visit :)

Jesse Zerlaut July 16, 2017 at 11:09 PM A bucket of cold water later. Well wrote. What an awesome, steamy piece! Akkina Downing July 17, 2017 at 8:01 AM Lol! Thank you Jesse, good to see you too :)

Silent One July 15, 2017 at 11:37 AM Damn and the rest is history... Congrats on POTD Akkina Downing July 15, 2017 at 3:45 PM OMG, you're back!!! I'm so happy to see you SO :)

Sunita U.D Palawon July 15, 2017 at 2:20 AM Once or ever...a sign of love to hold upon ever! Great work. Congrats for POTD. :) Akkina Downing July 15, 2017 at 6:32 AM Thank you so much Sunita

Connie Marcum Wong July 14, 2017 at 10:08 PM Wow Akkina, passion on parade! A lovely, lovely poem. Congratulations on POTD! Akkina Downing July 15, 2017 at 6:27 AM Thank you so much Miss Connie :)

Ralph Sergi July 14, 2017 at 7:15 PM Hello Akkina: You expounded on an honest feeling of what they call making love (ha ha) Love is just contentment with each other. Congrats on your POTD..! Akkina Downing July 14, 2017 at 7:21 PM Lol! Thank you Ralph :)

Sara Ella July 14, 2017 at 7:03 PM Whew! It is hot :) Congratulations on the POTD, Akkina <3 Akkina Downing July 14, 2017 at 7:08 PM Haha :) thank you so much Sara! Hugs :)

Dean Wood July 14, 2017 at 2:17 PM Definitely a passionate poem! Congratulations on POTD recognition Akkina! - Dean Akkina Downing July 14, 2017 at 2:27 PM Thank you so much Dean :)!

Eve Roper July 14, 2017 at 12:01 PM Congratulations on POTD ~* Akkina Downing July 14, 2017 at 12:33 PM Thank you so much Eve :)

Charlie Smith July 14, 2017 at 8:59 AM Back to send accolades your way, congratulations Akkina for POTD honors... Daniel Turner July 14, 2017 at 7:40 PM Hi, Mr Smith:) Akkina Downing July 14, 2017 at 12:33 PM Lol! I appreciate it Mr.Smith and thank you :)

Edward Mccall July 14, 2017 at 8:47 AM What a romantic and passionate poem Kina. A very sensuous read congrats on POTD Akkina Downing July 14, 2017 at 12:27 PM Thank you very much Ed :) have a great weekend!

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