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A Night of Passion

It wasn't love they needed
It was a night of passion they yearned for
       One feverish touch 
       One delicious kiss
and it was a blaze of flame 
they could not resist 

She was in a high fever to touch and feel all of him 
He was on fire ready to explode needing her ever most

They need not the light on 
They just need each other 
         In the dark
         In the bed
There they explore undisturbed
There they found pure satisfactions
     She lay shamelessly smiling 
     He, holding on to her happily
  
        Smile 
Akkina R Downing 
      7-12-17

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Paul Callus

Date: 3/24/2018 5:58:00 PM

I don't know how I missed this one, Akkina! It's lovely, romantic and passionate to say the least. I see you were awarded POTD for it, so...Congratulations:) Smiles & Hugs // paul

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/22/2017 3:30:00 PM

Yeah, I feel the vibe of this poem for real, Akkina. Passion of fire always warms the soul, and two always draw more heat ... much like this sensual poem. Caliente fiery write. A sparkling gold Romantico poem. Love and joy always.

Akkina Downing
Date: 11/24/2017 9:56:00 PM

Many many thanks my dear friend... hugs and smiles and loves always :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/22/2017 1:06:00 PM

ooh la la. Your SECOND best poem is sizzling!!

Akkina Downing
Date: 11/22/2017 1:55:00 PM

Thanks Drea :) hugs and smiles :)

Cebo Soul

Date: 8/20/2017 2:03:00 PM

well written,I loved it.

Akkina Downing
Date: 8/20/2017 5:51:00 PM

Thank you Cebo! :)

Kudzai Mhangwa

Date: 8/3/2017 12:57:00 PM

Nice piece here Akkina!

Akkina Downing
Date: 8/4/2017 12:16:00 PM

Thank you Kudzai :)

Mike Reed

Date: 8/2/2017 4:29:00 AM

I think we just Might Workout after all! Sweet, sweet Akkina! Wow!

Akkina Downing
Date: 8/4/2017 12:17:00 PM

Lol! Thank you Mike :)

Ram R. V.

Date: 7/29/2017 5:40:00 AM

Genuine passion! Good read. well done, Akkina! Ram

Akkina Downing
Date: 7/29/2017 12:52:00 PM

Thank you so kindly Ram :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/26/2017 8:39:00 AM

Here you clearly capture the intense heat and great need oft two overs share. Such experiences are treasures in life , for when love is that strong--its a rare gift. A fav..

Akkina Downing
Date: 7/26/2017 10:06:00 AM

Thank you so much Rob, I'm always happy to hear from you. Your visit and comment means a lot to me. Hugs :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/23/2017 8:52:00 PM

Ohh lala.., what a hot passionate night! Very beautifully done Akkina! Congrats on POTD:)

Akkina Downing
Date: 7/23/2017 9:07:00 PM

Hahaha ;) it was a fun write, and thank you so much :)

James Swartz

Date: 7/18/2017 5:35:00 PM

Great sensual feelings this produces in my mind. Very nice words to make us remember love.

Akkina Downing
Date: 7/18/2017 8:19:00 PM

Thank you James :)

Pashang Salehi

Date: 7/18/2017 11:42:00 AM

“Be the flame, not the moth.”

Akkina Downing
Date: 7/18/2017 12:27:00 PM

Haha... hello Pashang, thanks for the visit and comment :)

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 7/17/2017 12:08:00 PM

Wow! Steamy hot love in the dark.... Congrats on POTD Akkina; a very nice change for a good read:-)

Akkina Downing
Date: 7/17/2017 12:17:00 PM

;) thank you Keith!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/17/2017 5:29:00 AM

Sizzle Sizzle...Lovely write, dear. I see that it got the POTD trophy! :) Great. Love a woman who can write about passion fearlessly. Hugs

Akkina Downing
Date: 7/17/2017 8:16:00 AM

Hello Miss Eileen, thank you for stopping by. I'm just having fun here on our play ground ;) big hugs and enjoy your week dear :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/17/2017 3:01:00 AM

- Sorry a little bit ... this beautiful poem deserved one p.o.t.d., congratulations Akkina :) - I have not been so much on " the soup" in recent weeks - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Akkina Downing
Date: 7/17/2017 8:11:00 AM

Awe, thank you Anne-Lise and I hope all is well. Have a great week dear...big hug :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 7/17/2017 1:41:00 AM

Excellent. Very romantic write. Congrats on the POTD Akkina. Thanks for sharing it.

Akkina Downing
Date: 7/17/2017 8:06:00 AM

Thank you so much Ravi, always made smile from your visit :)

Jesse Zerlaut

Date: 7/16/2017 11:09:00 PM

A bucket of cold water later. Well wrote. What an awesome, steamy piece!

Akkina Downing
Date: 7/17/2017 8:01:00 AM

Lol! Thank you Jesse, good to see you too :)

Silent One

Date: 7/15/2017 11:37:00 AM

Damn and the rest is history... Congrats on POTD

Akkina Downing
Date: 7/15/2017 3:45:00 PM

OMG, you're back!!! I'm so happy to see you SO :)

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 7/15/2017 2:20:00 AM

Once or ever...a sign of love to hold upon ever! Great work. Congrats for POTD. :)

Akkina Downing
Date: 7/15/2017 6:32:00 AM

Thank you so much Sunita

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/14/2017 10:08:00 PM

Wow Akkina, passion on parade! A lovely, lovely poem. Congratulations on POTD!

Akkina Downing
Date: 7/15/2017 6:27:00 AM

Thank you so much Miss Connie :)

Ralph Sergi

Date: 7/14/2017 7:15:00 PM

Hello Akkina: You expounded on an honest feeling of what they call making love (ha ha) Love is just contentment with each other. Congrats on your POTD..!

Akkina Downing
Date: 7/14/2017 7:21:00 PM

Lol! Thank you Ralph :)