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Aurora At Dawn

While duskfall pierces minted morning air Adorning trees with gracious loveliness: Sunlight braids pinkish ribbons in her hair, Indulgent as a reticent caress. How Aurora is but a breath away, While embroidered leaves flutter in the sun-- So crystalline- white is their mellow play Where all godly wishes of hope are spun. I wonder if such charms are a worldly dream Linked to just one immense eternity A lucent decoration on rails of stream; Captured in the glow of day's tapestry? I know not, yet my benign spirits rise So I lift my heart to feel sweet dawn's first kiss... Responding to the glaze before my eyes For all seems right on mornings such as this. `````````````````` John Hamilton's Best Rhyming Poem 3 Contest 4/18/2017 Poetry Form: Quatrain

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Date: 4/30/2017 11:03:00 AM
Well done Nette, I have enjoyed this poem.
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Date: 4/26/2017 9:43:00 AM
This is really beautiful, Nette, congratulations on your top win:) worthy of the win:)
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Date: 4/23/2017 3:07:00 PM
I like this a lot Nette, a win is not a surprizing event with quality in this range hope all's well.'
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Date: 4/22/2017 8:14:00 AM
Way to go Nette, congrats on your top win.
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Date: 4/21/2017 5:09:00 PM
Love everything about this wonderful piece - congrats, Nette!
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Date: 4/21/2017 12:59:00 AM
Beautiful imagery in your Rhyme! A++ Congrats on first place
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Date: 4/19/2017 8:17:00 PM
Beautiful! Congrats on top win, Nette!
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Date: 4/19/2017 4:18:00 PM
Congrats on your top win with this beautiful poem, nette.
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Date: 4/19/2017 1:34:00 PM
This is one of the best poems I've seen in quite a while, congrats on stand alone number 1.
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Date: 4/17/2017 6:12:00 PM
wonderful descriptions tranquil beauty is your pen
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Date: 4/17/2017 4:03:00 PM
A true pleasure reading this jewel today. Your poetry is always rich in delightfully colorful words, deep messages and inspiring thoughts/images.. Super 10 my friend.
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Date: 4/17/2017 3:23:00 PM
Praise be the grandeur of your morning!
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Date: 4/17/2017 3:05:00 PM
- A beautiful gem, Nette - Perfect rhyming - Welcome home, hope you have enjoyed your vacation :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/17/2017 2:10:00 PM
Wow, you awaken my senses through this lustrous Aurora gem. I think my muse is back. Thank you!
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Date: 4/17/2017 1:51:00 PM
An enchanting beauty floats in your words today Nette. Incredibly beautiful and mesmerizing.
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Date: 4/17/2017 1:49:00 PM
To bond with the eternities is itself a beautiful moment dear poet
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Date: 4/17/2017 1:45:00 PM
A wonderful caress of words to read on this day nette, truly great imagery and flair. Blessings Carl
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