Gregory Richard Barden Poet Rhyme

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Daybreak

so many moons have danced a-sea

          and swum in eyes, entrancing me

               but such dear blessings pale to one -

     the chance to rise with each new sun.









Copyright © Gregory Richard Barden, October 6, 2023

( photo of sunrise at Portland Headlight taken by Gregory R Barden 1974 )

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Mahtab Bangalee October 17, 2023 at 3:31 AM wonderful the daybreak Gregory Richard Barden October 20, 2023 at 10:27 PM That’s very kind, Mahtab, thank you!

Karen Jones October 17, 2023 at 12:40 AM Beautiful thought. Gregory Richard Barden October 20, 2023 at 10:26 PM Many kind thanks, Karen!

Daisy Meadows October 17, 2023 at 12:21 AM A lovely poem. Well done. Gregory Richard Barden October 20, 2023 at 10:26 PM Thanks so much, Jeanette!