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When Her Roses Bloom

Rose petals floated in the dusty air.
A few landed at my feet as I sat weeping,
remembering the playful way she teased me
on the day she painted the old picket fence.

"It needs to be painted," she chided.
Fingers of a brisk March wind 
brushed through her hair. All I could do
was stare at her beauty, the blush of cheeks
much more lovely then her roses.

"My climbing roses are much too pretty
to rest upon this dreary old faded fence,
but I can do it all by myself."

She smiled and plucked one of her pink roses,
tipped it in white wash and presented it to me
with the most graceful curtsey I'd ever seen.

That rose had been drying on the mantle 
since that day, now brittle, gathering dust
and as hard as I tried not to touch,
when I held it, the petals fell, one by one.

She's been gone for too many years,
and through each one of them I've cried.
Today I white washed that fence again,
and when her roses come in to bloom
my heart will be consumed with the vision
of her smiling face and the gift of a rose, 
white washed by her gentle hand.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 8/12/2017 11:07:00 AM
Such a gentle, loving memory this poem evokes, Lin. You did a wonderful job of making us feel the love and loss of someone dear to the heat. Pure poetry, dear. Love and hugs.
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Lin Lane
Date: 8/12/2017 11:51:00 AM
Thanks very much, Freddie.
Date: 8/9/2017 9:08:00 AM
Poignant and wonderful. Well done.
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Lin Lane
Date: 8/12/2017 3:31:00 AM
Thank you most sincerely, Klio.
Date: 8/8/2017 4:34:00 AM
Such a sad, but well constructed and brilliantly portrayed write my friend! I truly loved reading this exquisite poem this morning (I'm a little late in responding)! What a tremendous piece, such a, to borrow Greg's word below, melancholy but stunning poem, Great Work!!
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Lin Lane
Date: 8/8/2017 5:25:00 AM
It's never too late, Russell. Thank you for finding this one and taking time to leave your kind comments.
Date: 8/7/2017 10:50:00 PM
Oh, my, how wonderfully and exquisitely poignant, charming, whimsical, and melancholy, (all my favorite adjectives) ... the way you have translated her personality makes me want to know her - know more about her! It also reminds me SO clearly of sitting on my grandparents patio, watching my grandmother in her amazing garden, picking fresh flowers for the table, (as she did EVERY day) ... the fragrance, peaceful joy - oh, I miss those simple days so much! This is sublime, and I HAVE to fav it! <3
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Date: 8/8/2017 5:25:00 AM
I think your favorite adjectives are now mine. Thank you for so many wonderful remarks, Greg, and happy to know this brought you some tender nostalgic memories. ;-)
Date: 8/7/2017 5:02:00 PM
a poignant poem, lin, most beautifully rendered. i was able to picture it all so clearly and love the way you've told the story...
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Lin Lane
Date: 8/7/2017 6:26:00 PM
I'm delighted that you saw it clearly, Ilene. Thanks.
Date: 8/7/2017 4:43:00 PM
A lovely story! Sentimental! Love it, Lin!
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Lin Lane
Date: 8/7/2017 6:25:00 PM
Many thanks, Kim.
Date: 8/7/2017 4:29:00 PM
Gosh the emotional ending brought a lump to my throat Lin such wonderful memories to be cherished forever:-) hugs Jan xx
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Lin Lane
Date: 8/7/2017 6:25:00 PM
Thank you, my kind friend. ;-)
Date: 8/7/2017 3:57:00 PM
What lovely memories anyone would be blessed to have. Beautifully written Dear Lin...
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Lin Lane
Date: 8/7/2017 4:02:00 PM
Thank you very kindly for your comments, Charlie ;-)
Date: 8/7/2017 2:31:00 PM
That was really beautiful, Lin. Though lost for now, we will see those we love again, I believe. :)
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Lin Lane
Date: 8/7/2017 3:43:00 PM
I believe we will, Mike. Thank you ever so much for liking this one.
Date: 8/7/2017 1:50:00 PM
a cherished moment understood at the beginning of your poem, in the end, held tight yet gentle in its sad reflection
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Lin Lane
Date: 8/7/2017 3:42:00 PM
You grasp the emotion in this one, Frederic, and your comments are so encouraging. Thanks so much.
Date: 8/7/2017 12:58:00 PM
This beautiful write packs sad emotions Lin...Well penned...a fave...
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Lin Lane
Date: 8/7/2017 3:41:00 PM
I appreciate your kind remarks, Joseph. Thank you.
Date: 8/7/2017 12:51:00 PM
This is such a nice poem Lin. Very special. I agree with Tim..her memory does live on with the roses :)
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Lin Lane
Date: 8/7/2017 3:41:00 PM
Thank you very much, Heidi.
Date: 8/7/2017 12:27:00 PM
It is beautiful with a hint of sadness Lin. Her memory alive in the roses.
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Date: 8/7/2017 12:40:00 PM
Thank you, Tim. I could see it in my mind's eye as I typed.
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