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Rose petals floated in the dusty air. A few landed at my feet as I sat weeping, remembering the playful way she teased me on the day she painted the old picket fence. "It needs to be painted," she chided. Fingers of a brisk March wind brushed through her hair. All I could do was stare at her beauty, the blush of cheeks much more lovely then her roses. "My climbing roses are much too pretty to rest upon this dreary old faded fence, but I can do it all by myself." She smiled and plucked one of her pink roses, tipped it in white wash and presented it to me with the most graceful curtsey I'd ever seen. That rose had been drying on the mantle since that day, now brittle, gathering dust and as hard as I tried not to touch, when I held it, the petals fell, one by one. She's been gone for too many years, and through each one of them I've cried. Today I white washed that fence again, and when her roses come in to bloom my heart will be consumed with the vision of her smiling face and the gift of a rose, white washed by her gentle hand.

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Date: 8/12/2017 11:07:00 AM
Such a gentle, loving memory this poem evokes, Lin. You did a wonderful job of making us feel the love and loss of someone dear to the heat. Pure poetry, dear. Love and hugs.
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Date: 8/12/2017 11:51:00 AM
Thanks very much, Freddie.
Date: 8/9/2017 9:08:00 AM
Poignant and wonderful. Well done.
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Date: 8/12/2017 3:31:00 AM
Thank you most sincerely, Klio.
Date: 8/8/2017 4:34:00 AM
Such a sad, but well constructed and brilliantly portrayed write my friend! I truly loved reading this exquisite poem this morning (I'm a little late in responding)! What a tremendous piece, such a, to borrow Greg's word below, melancholy but stunning poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 8/8/2017 5:25:00 AM
It's never too late, Russell. Thank you for finding this one and taking time to leave your kind comments.
Date: 8/7/2017 10:50:00 PM
Oh, my, how wonderfully and exquisitely poignant, charming, whimsical, and melancholy, (all my favorite adjectives) ... the way you have translated her personality makes me want to know her - know more about her! It also reminds me SO clearly of sitting on my grandparents patio, watching my grandmother in her amazing garden, picking fresh flowers for the table, (as she did EVERY day) ... the fragrance, peaceful joy - oh, I miss those simple days so much! This is sublime, and I HAVE to fav it! <3
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Date: 8/8/2017 5:25:00 AM
I think your favorite adjectives are now mine. Thank you for so many wonderful remarks, Greg, and happy to know this brought you some tender nostalgic memories. ;-)
Date: 8/7/2017 5:02:00 PM
a poignant poem, lin, most beautifully rendered. i was able to picture it all so clearly and love the way you've told the story...
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Date: 8/7/2017 6:26:00 PM
I'm delighted that you saw it clearly, Ilene. Thanks.
Date: 8/7/2017 4:43:00 PM
A lovely story! Sentimental! Love it, Lin!
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Date: 8/7/2017 6:25:00 PM
Many thanks, Kim.
Date: 8/7/2017 4:29:00 PM
Gosh the emotional ending brought a lump to my throat Lin such wonderful memories to be cherished forever:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/7/2017 6:25:00 PM
Thank you, my kind friend. ;-)
Date: 8/7/2017 3:57:00 PM
What lovely memories anyone would be blessed to have. Beautifully written Dear Lin...
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Date: 8/7/2017 4:02:00 PM
Thank you very kindly for your comments, Charlie ;-)
Date: 8/7/2017 2:31:00 PM
That was really beautiful, Lin. Though lost for now, we will see those we love again, I believe. :)
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Date: 8/7/2017 3:43:00 PM
I believe we will, Mike. Thank you ever so much for liking this one.
Date: 8/7/2017 1:50:00 PM
a cherished moment understood at the beginning of your poem, in the end, held tight yet gentle in its sad reflection
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Date: 8/7/2017 3:42:00 PM
You grasp the emotion in this one, Frederic, and your comments are so encouraging. Thanks so much.
Date: 8/7/2017 12:58:00 PM
This beautiful write packs sad emotions Lin...Well penned...a fave...
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Date: 8/7/2017 3:41:00 PM
I appreciate your kind remarks, Joseph. Thank you.
Date: 8/7/2017 12:51:00 PM
This is such a nice poem Lin. Very special. I agree with Tim..her memory does live on with the roses :)
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Date: 8/7/2017 3:41:00 PM
Thank you very much, Heidi.
Date: 8/7/2017 12:27:00 PM
It is beautiful with a hint of sadness Lin. Her memory alive in the roses.
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Date: 8/7/2017 12:40:00 PM
Thank you, Tim. I could see it in my mind's eye as I typed.

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